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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good title for this chapter as Harry and Draco are the very image of immovable object and irresistible force with both of them determined to win this tug of war over Harry's memories of the war. Draco is way too sure of himself, and I wouldn't put it pass Harry not to take a peek inside his thoughts even as they shared their dinner together. Harry has little reason to trust any writer, much less his former rival from his Hogswarts' days when it comes to sharing any portion of his life so freely and without some lingering reservations to boot. Perhaps it would help Draco to gain Harry's trust by talking about his own wartime memories, especially those involving what he tried to do for the Dark Lord in order to protect his parents-his family. That coupled with a sincere regret for his past behavior in regards toward Harry and his friends might be a step in the right direction. At any rate please continue to feed my addiction to your unique ability to tell a tale that keeps me coming back for more.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So Malfoy is out to score another book based on the quintessential hero of heroes with Potter. I'm curious to see what their dinner will consist of as they attempt to verbally dance around each other and see who gives in first. More to the point will you make this another serious one, or will there be comic moments to up the ante when it comes to the end? However you write it is fine with me, but please continue to do your thing-kay? TTFN.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
His correspondence.... hmmmm well it seems like Draco hasnt gotten far in finding out anything about harry, other than the mysterious letter. Is Draco gonna investigate now?
ooooh, i cant wait! I look forward to the next chapter!
ooooh, i cant wait! I look forward to the next chapter!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good job, I really love it and I can't wait for the next installment.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Iam officially addicted! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this seems really great! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #2
Whoa! O_o
Now, THIS is awesome..so far. A story you can REALLY sink your teeth into
and STILL not be full until it's almost at the end! :-)
Praise! Praise to the author, who is on vacation!
What I'd liked about this right away was your description of Harry right off
the bat. You immediately gave me a visual of a MAN, who's lived a lot of
intense years & is VERY sure of himself...on the outside. No telling what
the inside is like.
Plus, it's interesting how you've made Draco a writer & the description of
his world seems spot on. Makes me wonder have you considered making writing
your main profession in some type of venue?
Anyway, do a reader a favor and break down the meaning of your story title.
Whoa! O_o
Now, THIS is awesome..so far. A story you can REALLY sink your teeth into
and STILL not be full until it's almost at the end! :-)
Praise! Praise to the author, who is on vacation!
What I'd liked about this right away was your description of Harry right off
the bat. You immediately gave me a visual of a MAN, who's lived a lot of
intense years & is VERY sure of himself...on the outside. No telling what
the inside is like.
Plus, it's interesting how you've made Draco a writer & the description of
his world seems spot on. Makes me wonder have you considered making writing
your main profession in some type of venue?
Anyway, do a reader a favor and break down the meaning of your story title.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story just caught my attention, like so many other stories of yours, and I can't wait for Harry and Draco's dinner! :D
It is infinitely amazing how you captured Draco in this chapter, and I like how you portray Harry, too. They'll make this story all the better as it progresses! :D Hurry and update! I'll be waiting! <3
Much love and luck,
Lunamaru
The Yaoi Queen of Doom
It is infinitely amazing how you captured Draco in this chapter, and I like how you portray Harry, too. They'll make this story all the better as it progresses! :D Hurry and update! I'll be waiting! <3
Much love and luck,
Lunamaru
The Yaoi Queen of Doom
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
will there b smutness involved inthis lovely tale ?
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....i'm very interested now. Draco is pretty determined, ain't he? You got him perfecct in character. And i'm glad that you writing the determined, intelligent, auror version of Harry in this story. Contrasts perfectly with draco and fits the plot greatly.
I do look forward to your next chapter, and i hope you update soon. This story seems to have much potential, so I hope it's really long. : )
Looking forward to the next update.
I do look forward to your next chapter, and i hope you update soon. This story seems to have much potential, so I hope it's really long. : )
Looking forward to the next update.