rate_review Reviews

Sooooo need chapter 4!!!

Excellent first chapter! So very well written it makes me want to cry ;)

I actually haven't yet read a post Deathly Hallows. I've been too scared they might ruin the thrill of Rowling's perfect last book. But Incandescence hasn't done that (so far) because of the way you've written your Harry, I think. I love the intelligent, strong, independent, and (most of all) war-hardended Harry. Which is probably why Rowling's epilogue wasn't 100% for me. I would have liked to see a bit more (Oh, I hate this word) angst. But you're Harry has the perfect amount of angst and also sexiness ;)

I'm also appriciative of your Draco. Peaceful, reserved, and yet still a complete snob. I think that you've created the perfect balance between him and Harry, which will make them fit right together when the time comes.

I can't wait to read more! If the rest of the story is half so good as the first chapter, I'll scream from the rooftops xD

Ha I knew he would caught, and Draco thinks himself a shadow...what a load of crap.
Excited for the next chapter.

Well that went as well as expected. His rating just went up from annoying to infuriating where Harry is concerned, and that could have serious consequences for him and even from his own family. Harry might take legal action, and frankly I couldn't blame him for such a serious breech of privacy. How will Draco make up for this not so little faux paux is clearly up to you, so I guess I must be patient for now. So please continue this relentless tug of war.

HAHAHAHA! Not very clever then. Oh, but what kind of story is this if harry is so persistent and malfoy cant get anything useful from anybody? Oh, but I do wonder what the line in the letter meant. Harry can 'see' things, or something... I'll have to go back and check on that...
I look forward to your next update. I really am curious to what will happen next. I feel bad for Malfoy that no body believes in him. I mean, yes it's partly his fault but still. And now Malfoy has no chance with harry after his little 'investigation'.... : (
Update soon please! Can't wait!!

Oooo, that was an interesting dinner! I love the civil tension between Harry and Draco. And I love that each can continuously surprise the other. It would be no fun if Harry could read Draco too well, or vice versa. Also Harry's enjoyment of the food was nice to read. I especially loved his 'heavy pewter tankard'. Such vivid images! I can really see him sitting in this rugged, cave-like setting, drinking his beer, looking like a real man's man *shivers* xD

Which brings me to my next thought: your vocabulary is so refreshing! I admit, oftentimes in my own writing I find myself repeating the same words too often and having to dig through a thesaurus for hours until I'm happy. Your own word choice seems to flow so smoothly. Excellent!

Now, I must find out what that letter was! xD

Oh, cleverly executed, Draco. *Sarcasm* He certainly has lost a bit of his Slytherin touch. Maybe he should go back to school xD

I loved this chapter! Oh the Malfoy family *heart flutters* and you've collected the essence of them all so well. Hmm, I wonder where Cissy's new softened feelings for Harry come from. I certainly loved listening to her talk about him during the Battle of Hogwarts. It almost sounded like...reverence. I loved the line about her imagination walking with Harry. Also the banter between her and Lucius.

Draco's stubborness is surely getting the best of him. I hope it continues ;) He's so cute when he's thwarted! Go Harry! Mmm, the power radiating around him. Yumyum.

Impatiently awaiting the moment when Draco will 'get in him' xD Great job!

ouch just thinking about that curse hurts my tongue.

Oooh very interesting. I hope you write more of this soon. Will it be a longer fic? You just finished one a few days ago right?

Can't wait for chapter 3! Harry wants to cook for Draco?