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:D they were holding hands and for so long. lol don't mind me im being silly. i can't wait for the next one

i say harry will be an old ugly man...my guess lol

Sooo need chapter 9! I hope Draco knows what he's doing!

about #8...

Ooo, this sounds like it might be fun with this bet. :-D

You know I see that a LOT of authors seem to share a type of...empathy?...when it
comes to Draco. In other words, it seems easier to get into HIS head than Harry's.

[Correct me, if that sounds wrong]

I like how this Draco is a bit freer in attitude AND of course, I like his sarcastic wit [I can relate to that]. He brings a light-heartedness to a serious situation, especially since Harry is SOOO...strict, being the Auror that he is.

It'll be interesting to see how you develop this relationship or I
should say, how you'll get it started.

This is completely awesome. I love the way you're taking your time with it. Very good and complex characterization.I can't wait to see more. :D

Interesting bet now no matter who wins they spend the evening together, so it's a win-win, though the itching powder sounds funnier.

I can't help but wonder if Harry is looking for the telltale signs of immanent death that would suggest a risk of danger to Draco. That is both touching, yet distubingly eerie at the same time. It must be depressing to have such uncommon knowledge, which makes for a lonely existance, especially to someone like Harry who's life had been harrowing enough since he was a small babe. This Yoland Timpany maybe a red herring, but she looks the part of someone who's not to be trifled with in any capacity. At any rate it was good to see them making a friendly wager along with planning their trap, which hopefully will begin to draw them closer together. You've managed to whet my appetite for more, so please continue to slowly unravel this juicy mystery. ;) ta for now!

Oooo! Now I can't decide which I want to win more! Of course I'd love for Harry to have to be open with Draco and answer his questions. But then I'd also really enjoy an auror lesson for Draco in which Harry is in total control. That seems like great fun. So I'm sure I'll be happy no matter which outcome this bet has. Not to mention they held hands, so I'm already happy ^_^

Hmm, Yolanda continues to intrigue me. She's such a strange character, I rather like her xD I'm excited to find out what Draco can weasel out of her at the Hog's Head--that is, if there is anything to be weaseled out.

How distubing to see what Harry has seen, and as Hermione once said before it's not good to hear, or in this case see things that others can not whether in the wizarding or the muggle world. Draco must wonder how can he bear it, this terrible gift of knowing the evil that others do, even to what awaits them in the beyond. Still it is a step in the right direction for Harry to seek help from Draco who has already made an effort on his behalf. This is a very interesting use of the Deathly Hallows as a connection to the beyond, with serious consequences for those who meddle in the lives of others no matter what their reasons. Please continue with this fascinating tale of yours.

Your head is full of the most interesting plot-lines! I don't usually review, but I felt compelled, because I pounce whenever you update on of your fics. I love the dynamic you craft between Harry and Draco, and the progression of their relationship. It's always filled with passion, tension and entertaining verbal sparring. I love that the characters have flaws, and the slow build up to Harry and Draco's romantic entanglements seems more realistic given their turbulent history. Anyway, I love your writing! Your Harry and Draco are always fun to read about. I can't wait to read more, of this story and the others you've got on the update cycle right now! Brilliant!