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Draco seems stable enough to deal with Harry's "gifts", especially after nearly losing his mind to someone so eerily deranged. It's pretty clear that Harry wants him, but has a dread of giving his heart and being hurt once more. Now let's see what you've got planned next. Maybe a resolution for poor Harry's affliction from his departed ones from the dead. It's your move dear heart, so be all means please do continue this. Kay?

Absolutely wonderful! I love Draco and Harry's characterization! Though Draco kissing Harry's fingers was sort of random. I felt as though I missed a secret yaoi love scene in a previous chapter. But the connection between Harry and Draco seems right. (Not just because I'm a yaoi fangirl) But because the things they say to each other and their subtle actions. (Like Draco's spell for the bet last chapter.) I almost wish that this story was longer to that I could see the relationship between Harry and Draco unravel even slower and in more detail.... who am I kidding. I wanna see them smooch and do the yaoi! X3

The pacing was really good and the details of the death world were terrifing. I got cold reading them. LOVE LOVE LOVE! Can NOT wait for more.

This is a wonderful, brilliant fanfiction, but I feel like I'm missing something in this chapter.
In most of the other chapters, Harry was pretty mistrusting of Draco or suspicious, and Draco didn't really see him in THAT kind of light, you know? And then suddenly, Harry's caressing Draco and doing what he says and Draco's kissing his fingers.
I'm kinda confused at the sudden jump. xD
But, other than that, fantastic fic~! :3

I think-- pssh, scratch that. I know that this is one of my favourites of your works in progress, tied somewhere between Their Phoenix and Company Manners. It's strange, but I suppose that those who define themselves by the written word enjoy stories about others who define themselves similarly. That didn't make much sense. I guess, as a bookworm, I like to read about bookworms and authors?
Oh! There's a book that I think you would enjoy, The Thirteenth Tale by Diane Setterfield. It's kind of, sort of, not really in the same shelf as Incandescence. Oh, I do hope that Draco and Harry recognize and act on their feelings. *sigh*

ohh Harry is the new Dark Lord, even if he isn't evil. Cool

Harry would feel like an executioner more than an auror with such powers at his command, but he saved Draco from madness, if not certain death, and that matters a great deal here. Timpany, herself, (belle dame sans merci),unforunately was a mental case who crossed the line between genius and insanity with no guilt whatsoever as she was relentless in the pursuit of her art. At least I was correct about Harry's using his ability to divine who was guilty of murder and soon to die. Now what's next, well dear heart that is up to you so please continue-;)!!!

Hey . . . why does it stop? In the mi

That's very true. Probably one of the reasons I like her. She's not a dumb villian :)

Harry's ability is getting more and more interesting! And more and more haunting. Poor Harry. Dealing with the dead really takes a toll on him, I see that more in this chapter than all chapters before this. I really liked Draco's reaction to Harry after being released. Simple, sweet, and yet very Draco.

Can't wait for more!

Can't wait for chapter 11!!! Will Harry tell him everything!!!

aww i saw that bit about draco kissing harry's fingers. hopefully there will be more kissage, made up that word, in the next chapter