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for Incandescence

by Lomonaaeren

person Kelsey
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice. :3 You're writing is wonderful~
Though, I am very disappointed there was no sex. :[
Nonetheless, amazing job. <3
person Juana13
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha Loved this! thanks for writing it, and i look forward to more works from you : )
person Snivelly
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was an excellent ending!

I loved the bit with Luna and Neville. Those two really make me smile :) And of course! I felt exactly what Draco felt when Cassidy gave him the idea of writing about himself. That feeling of mentally slapping yourself in the forehead. It's so obvious and yet I hadn't thought of it either xD

I love how you ended with Harry and Draco in a comfortable relationship without changing Harry's character. Too often authors write a hard Harry who falls in love with Draco and becomes soft, mushy, romantic Harry. Your ending was very well done--hell, the entire story was amazing! Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh i so hurtin to see where u take this now haha!
person jenny
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely Wonderful.
person SP777
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #11...

I have to say if I haven't already that I am in love with this
version of Draco that you've created. He's witty, funny and the 'funny man' to
Harry's 'straight man', which is a uncommon or I should say, not regularly
seen in this section.

I take it he's somewhat patterned after you?

I get the feeling the story is coming to a close, but to be honest I can see...or maybe not. Never mind.

Oh YEAH, you got me curious about what it is Draco has written regarding the other
novels, ever thought about doing side stories on what he wrote in the other sections?
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo can't wait for chapter 12!!!
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm very glad that Draco is getting what he wants because this chapter was SO ADORABLY FLUFFY! I love your writting style and how it makes each characer distinct. I was also happy to see a little of Harry's view on Draco. (I squealed when he mentioned seeing Draco in the newspaper. The confession made me happy. It tied in a little of their past.)

AMAZING! You are the Queen of Dialog and Physical Signals between Hot Wizardly Men!
person Juana13
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving this! can't wait for more! : )
person Snivelly
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The way they went from nothing to something was smooth and quick and yet always remained very in character. The way you've written your Harry and Draco enabled this conversation and its outcome almost as though the entire story built up to this moment. I'm very impressed by this chapter :D

You know, if you ended it right now I think it would be excellent. On the other hand, I really hope you don't end it now xD I'm anxiously awaiting more Harry/Draco interaction now that they're working toward a relationship ^_^

On another note, I was looking through your other stories and I've decided I want to read For Their Unconquerable Souls and Bloody But Unbowed. But I'd like to ask your opinion on which one you think I should read first. Obviously you wrote Bloody But Unbowed first but I was curious about how it would alter the story if I switched the order.