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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing, long read! And in just a chapter, which, although it may cheat you out of some reviews, I actually adore, since 1. You know the fic is finished, and the author is not going to go on hiatus and leave you without the end to your favourite fic, and 2. I am admittedly lazy and the lack of wait while unloading pages is a plus.
I love your characterizations, despite the fact that some might find them slightly OOC. I don't. Severus is still himself, just not only what we see in the books, and what we see in the books is filtered by the viewpoint of his students, so he doesn't come out in the best light always. And Ron is wonderful. He's everything he could be. He still has a temper, and he is still self-deprecating, but experimenting the dreams, and discussing things with Severus, as well as thinking over his decissions, gives him an emotional maturity which I believe suits him well.
Your language is beautiful, too. The pace of the development, the conversations and dialogue, the fact that Ron's friends are not automatically 'yay!', but need a certain time to come to terms, which makes it the more realistic.
I enjoyed this fic immensely, and thank you so much for sharing it with us.
PS: The image of Severus and Ron in a suit will follow me to the end of my days. I have a serious kink for men in suits.
I love your characterizations, despite the fact that some might find them slightly OOC. I don't. Severus is still himself, just not only what we see in the books, and what we see in the books is filtered by the viewpoint of his students, so he doesn't come out in the best light always. And Ron is wonderful. He's everything he could be. He still has a temper, and he is still self-deprecating, but experimenting the dreams, and discussing things with Severus, as well as thinking over his decissions, gives him an emotional maturity which I believe suits him well.
Your language is beautiful, too. The pace of the development, the conversations and dialogue, the fact that Ron's friends are not automatically 'yay!', but need a certain time to come to terms, which makes it the more realistic.
I enjoyed this fic immensely, and thank you so much for sharing it with us.
PS: The image of Severus and Ron in a suit will follow me to the end of my days. I have a serious kink for men in suits.