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for Black Knight, White Queen

by andarte

schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriging .... well here we go again.. Love it!!
person mlui
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this is a great start! I'm curious why the Order didn't have any precautions? After all, if a Death Eater can turn coat supposedly, then wouldn't he likely to betray them too in the future? And Draco doesn't seem to be in the Order long...didn't they make him pass along valuable information to gain trust? Are Harry and Ron dead? I'm looking forward to the next chapter; will it be a week between updates like your last fic?
person mlui
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
2: Interesting chapter. Haha, I just asked about when you're updating and then I realized a second chapter was up. I like the chess tidbits at the beginning of the chapters. I've never played chess before, so it's interesting to see what the pieces mean. I wonder what's happening in teh outside world as Draco keeps coming back with blood on him. Are they attacking or defending? =)
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a lovely yet tragic chapter. her compassion overrides any anger or supposed hatred she feels. draco is quite the enigma isn't he? obviously something is driving his need and actions to keep her from harm.
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my ... and his feelings are shared. Clearly something more is going on that what we know. I swear I can actually see this fic in my brain as you write it. Its quite wonderful. Can't wait for more.
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good story, cant wait for the rest.