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for Black Knight, White Queen

by andarte

schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh-my-gosh! i am dying to know what happens next. i have to say that the relationship you have created in just a few chapters is exactly how i would see a dramoine working out realistically. even though draco hides it so well he has an incredible soft side and hermoine is drawn to seek out that part of him :)
person mlui
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
3: Fantastic chapter! What he said in his sleep was unexpected, but nevertheless nice. =)
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like this so far
i want to know what he says
hope u update soon
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next update
person jubilant
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So good! I love it keep going
person kazfeist
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning, so far. I love chess, and an anxious to see your game progresses. ;D
person kazfeist
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice third chapter! This story seems to have the feel of a shorter one, to me. I suspect the 'victory' of Voldemort is illusory. Can't wait for the rest. :D
person Robs
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Usually I'm a bit sceptical about stories where Draco chooses Hermione as his 'reward' for whatever reason, but your summary sounded better than average so I read it anyway. I'm glad I did. Even if it will only be a short story, I will still be glad I stopped revising to read it. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great start! can't wait to read more about the muggle chess ;)
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so are harry and ron dead? what exactly happened? hmmm, love mysterious Draco.

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