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for Black Knight, White Queen

by andarte

schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is great! :) can't wait to hear more!
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please please please up date :D
person jaceni50
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot and can't wait to find out more of how this all came about. Great characters. :)
person mlui
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
4: Fantastic chapter! I like how he finally explained through chess and she understands. I'm glad Harry is alive (hope he's okay!). =)
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i love your writing! but you rushed over the goodstuff at the end. :P
person Robs
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! I really like the way the whole thing is likened to a game of chess. It makes it that much more real, and shows more about their personalities and what they are actually going through. I am continuing to enjoy it, and I look forward to the next chapter....is he going to claim his white queen?
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are simply full of surprises. Love this confesion chapter. Please only one thing... Please a happy ever after for both, I know you love drama and make us cry. That is simply wonderful that you can pull those emotions out of us, but please please try a happy ending. LOL
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was beauuuuuuuuutiful. So quiet and lovely. I'm so glad he didn't sneer her away and confessed. The ending of the chapter was tender and delicious. I pray for no regrets, they can't afford them. I pray they come out alive and give it a chance.
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww you stopped at the good part lol
hope you update soon :)
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was intresting the romance is in the air.. Lovely.... Please I need some butt kicking for Voldie pls I know that in all the stories there has to be the evil mean guy but he is simply awful, never like him never will..