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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god,,that was the best written stories i have ever read...you really need to write stories like that for real..you could be rich...lol...i would buy them in a heart beat...the sensuality,emotion,discription,feel..it was all there..to be able to see and feel what you are reading is the making of a true writer...i hope to read more soon,,excelent indeed...
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! That was hot. I love the way you played it out as a fantasy in her notebook. So are they official now? Look forward to the next chapter!
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
squeeeeeee brilliant and smoking hotttt
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a lovely and seductive game this has become...
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh can't wait for more!
keep it up!
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keep it up!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
goood chapter..... can't wait to see what happens next!!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok he is good with judging character.. Nice.. we need a little bid of adventure not in a fantasy way (lol), but in there reality something mayor a life or death experience perhaps?????? and of course the daydreams to put them in both situations..
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco's right, you know, that fantasy wasn't as good as the others. Hmm, so the notebook is back in Draco's possession now...wonder what he's going to come up with? xD Look forward to the next chapter!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my...feelings are invovled....as they are with each other...