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Love love love this story, but I'm sure I'm not the only one to be very disappointed with the ending. I'm all for a happy ending where they end up together, and you may not be for it. But seriously, I think you can pull a couple more very interesting chapters from this story! It seems like a cliff hanger ending. I was kind of underwhelmed. Maybe you could have a chapter where Malfoy tries to fight for her? or a chapter of them after school? They could be together, or not together, and come across eachother? I love this story, and I enjoy the way you write, and I just don't think the ending does either justice.

WHAT?????? ARE YOU KIDDING????? Um, you had better write an epilogue or a sequel or SOMETHING! ARGH!

PS: fun fic but the ending - argh! *clutches heart*

Sequel Sequel Sequel.. Yes is all written in the lines between.. Please!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN..."THE END"..ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT..DAMN IT,,POST MORE AND SOON... ok, now that thats out of my system, this is really good, please post more soon,,dont end it like that..

:O Seriously? Is this a joke? Please tell me it isn't and that you've got more chapters or a sequel in the making?

I mean even if they don't end up together, there should be at least some more closure between Draco and Hermione. But that doesn't mean I want them to break up, they should be together.

Please continue this in some way, it's very good but could be wonderful with a little more :)

Will there be a sequel?? Please :) love the story

Brilliant idea to use the quick quill notes, loved the effect it had on Hermione when she finished reading it. I don't think he did anything to the spell to make it come out as anything other than what he intended, an honest account of his desire for her. He's definitely waiting to see what she thinks. Can't wait to see what's next.

I'm glad your Draco's brave enough to reveal his own feelings. And Hermione, being the gracious and sweet person she is, won't let him down. :D

That was really lovely.....

Excellent. Looking forward to reading more.