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for Just a Daydream

by ronsmistress

person MotekElm
schedule March 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Fantastic

person Liz
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your plot was good and the story Draco "wrote" after he read Hermione's notebook was a hoot. You do need a little editing for punctuation, spelling and grammar, nothing major, though. I was sad with the way you ended it. :( I always root for Draco and Hermione to stay together. :)
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story.
person Coipje
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh Hermione is such a bitch
the cheap bastard
person Robs
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo! You can't end there! You should write a sequel, or an epilogue....please? That last chapter was great. I love the way Draco challenged her, and she challenged him right back. Fabulous!
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I did like this story till I read the end. Please don't let it end this way, I think we all need more closure.
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO! Not the end! They have to end up together... otherwise, I'll cry and die inside. Please???? Don't be a meanie. They were meant to be together.
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you so can't end it there, the story hasn't finished!!
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE to be joking me right????????? You just killed me!!!! All your stories have happy endings why not this one????? I'm floored! I don't believe it!!! I'm plying out a better ending in my head but it's just not right!! I'm going to review all the damn time until I get a better ending... ok maybe not but damn it all to hell that just sucked!! But great story, sad about the ending!!!
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That cannot be the end!...Is it?? I hope not. Great chapter! A few errors here and there, but amazing nontheless!!

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