rate_review Reviews

Oh my god.....you have to continue! Please, OH.....I'll get down on my knees and beg you if it will help. I really will....hold on...here we go! I'm there. Typing on my knees! Please continue this story. This was a fantastic oneshot, but the ending was too cruel to leave it as just that. I want to see the look on Mr. Granger's face. "Hello, my name is Lucius Malfoy and I'm a fourty-something year old wizard who has on numerous occasions butted political heads with your daughter and tried to kill her. May I have your blessing to marry her?"

This is fantastic!

You say oneshot for now...make it a twoshot! Absolutely hilarious! Sometimes being a Pureblood sucks, doesn't it?

Interesting I like it.
Looking forward to more

This was wonderful. I hope that you decide to continue with it. I would love to read more.

what a deliciously funny story...

Awesome!

I wasn't expecting that! I guess it's a law mostly ignored, and it's the high profile of the female that's causing the problem. Will it be explained later on why he selected Hermione as a sex partner?

btw, being kicked out by the son who detests him is an excellent touch. Just piling it on poor Lucius. I also like the concept of his magical energy being built up, and potions and sex acting as a release.

Great story, but is that it? It could be so much longer than a one shot. Excellent writing and I hope to read more of it in the future.

mariteri:
More than likely this will not be all there is. It was taking forever to whip the muse into submission. She was damned and determined not to co-operate with the writing of this fic. Perhaps if I give the prompt more time to process in my head I could come up with the rest of the story...meeting her parents and such.
Thanks for reading!
MHS