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June 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoa?! That was HOT!!! And my dirty mind, loved every freaking bit of it! Whew! I love one-shots!! Cheers!!!;-)
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
liked it!hot!
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lawl., lovely ending hehe! Though the smut is too...smutty with too many difficult words.,
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha cool story. well written. i like the vulnerable bad boy and the dominant hermione. :)
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You really should write a second chapter, don't you think? :D
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great oneshot!!
you might want to give it a good proof read though,
there were quite a few instances where you had 'he' when you clearly meant 'her' or 'she'.
loved it though!
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you might want to give it a good proof read though,
there were quite a few instances where you had 'he' when you clearly meant 'her' or 'she'.
loved it though!
xxx