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by blackwhiteroses

person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I admit Sev fails miserably, for once i blamed him and i don't blame Harry, because I would have left too.
so it was sweet, but i was kinda funny that Sev was angry even though I understand why.
Anyway, good chapter, and i can't wait for more.
person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*eyes glisten and water* Oh i'm so happy Draco and Harry got their daddy back and Luc his hubby.That was amazing.
*amused* Oh yes and the joke about Darco and Charlie...always has me gripping my sides. LMAO
*eyes turn dark and gains an evil sadistic glint* Now onward to slice and dice Dumbledore and string up his corpse in the Great Hall Muwahahahahahahahahahaha! or we can just ruin his reputation in the wizarding world, by revealing his manipulative tendencies and he can get life in Azkaban for kidnapping and killing Lily Evans.

-I NEVER TOLD YOU WHAT I DO FOR A LIVING-
person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear.....I can't wait for that confrontation. The emotions are definitely gonna fly.....
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
erm... good story so far, just a little problem with word usage though... "you really should learn your daughter some manners..."?? do you mean "you really should teach your daughter some manners"?
and also..."They were mesmerized by each other
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! More Please! More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, MORE!
person qwerty
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see Harry react to seeing James!
keep going!
person qwerty
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far.
*sigh* Severus slipped Harry's real name after sex and Harry thought that Severus was just using him since Sev was in love with this "Corvus" guy (at least, that's what I'm getting from your story). So much drama!
Nice touch about Draco and his dragon-tamer boyfriend.
Keep going!
person Hello
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. Please continue. :)
person Layla
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story with many twists. After finding out all the wrong doings that Dumbledore has done and the disappearance of Harry. what will they do now. what is Harry going to do when he finds out that severus called him by his real name and not some other man. Please continue for i will love to see what happens next.