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for The Malfoy-Potters

by blackwhiteroses

schedule December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute, but I would liked to read the wedding and if Harry got pregnant again or not. It would have made it more interesting.
person don't worry about it
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The story line is excellent. However, be it time or that is just the way it has always been, the way (style='mso-ansi-language:EN-US'>) is on everyother line is very confusing and makes the story very very hard to read.
person kirigirl
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would really love to read a prequel! This was the first fic I read when I got back this morning, it would be cool to read about Lucius and James! Yay!
person frozenrose
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful! I loved it. Congrats for being a brilliantly talented writer! :)
person Layla
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I can see why the Malfoy's family is so bitter. It is a shame that Corvus is the one to suffer the most. I am glad that they all got to get to together and make up for lost time. I still think that Dumbledore had a little help with his heart failure even though it can not be proven, but guilt can cause so serious health problems. Hehe. Thank you for a wonderful read.
person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
VIVA LA PREQUEL!!!
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really enjoyed this and yes a prequel would be great and a squel would be like their wedding and more kids LOL. thanks for all the time you put into your story
person paganwoman
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet. A longer prequel would be nice, to go into further detail of why it all happened. Thanks
person Makovaso
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, please update soon.
person HPTwin
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Keep it comming can wait to see what happens next.