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by Lomonaaeren

person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such strong feelings swirling around their heads.
Paul was wrong to do that to Draco, and he brings a
certain meaning into his last name: Breaker.
can't wait for the next installment
person butterpie
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so used to deflecting other people away from him, even when they are pleasant company. Drawen to his former nemesis, but now always aware of what polite society may make of his actions by their swift if not level form of judgement, what a pity. Draco learned from his last encounter not to be too hasty with his heart, and yet he he comes again hoping that this time it will work out. I feel sorry for him a pure blood caged in traditions and such much like a canary trying to mate with a sparrow who is more used to being wild and free. This is going to be interesting to see just how much each can offer the other in terms of trust, friendship, and maybe love as well. Please continue.
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww poor draco, and poor harry if he's stopped connecting with ppl other than his previous friends, as it seems from all his training. cant wait for the next chap!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You are one of the few authors that I made damn sure I keep up with. Another great start to what I'm sure will be a wonderful story! :)
person SP777
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

What I liked most about this chapter is the beginning. The way Draco came across
here was reminiscent of a ''regular joe'' or ''just your ordinary guy.

He wasn't unapproachable, haughty, or some supremely intelligent human being
who just oozed sickening confidence.

Even though he IS confident he'll get Harry, he isn't in your face with it. His mannerisms isn't ''in your face'' here....and I'm sure you weren't self-concious
when you wrote him like that at first. As a matter of fact, the tone here is
basicly laid-back.

Are you chillin' over in your side of town? :-)
person CatGotMyHeart88
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh why cant harry get jealous or something poor draco.
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Harry, Harry, Harry... you'd like to think sympathy is the only thing you're going to give to Draco.

Excellent chapter. The story is picking up and I definitely get a better feel of how Draco is feeling and what he wants with Harry. Harry may think the only true side of him is the carefree side with Ron, but I think the political-savvy side is another part of him as well. He just has to realise it! ^^

I think Draco will help him along with that :)

Loved the chapter. Looking out for the next update! ^^
person Juana13
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great so far. : )
cant wait to read more on how draco plans to 'net' harry.
update again soon please!
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You just continue to blow me away and I'm soooo addicted!!! Can't wait for chapter 2!!!
person Snakekat
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Strong start, I like what you are doing with the new, smooth, calculating and politically astute Harry.
I look forward to reading about Draco's attempts to ensnare Harry.