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Ahhhh... so it all makes sense now!

I very much like the way Harry is rebelling against his sophisticated side. Draco can definitely be the wizard to help him. I also very much like the way Draco finally found out Harry is not completely the proper wizard like at the parties AND Draco's starting to accept it. Or at least think about it.

The hunt between them is nothing short of thrilling. Fantastic chapter.

Waiting hungrily for the next chapter! ^^

I'm enjoying this - I like stories that combine smut with a well-thought-out theme (although currently we're a little short on the smut! Hopefully that's coming). You are a good writer and the characters are well written. Good job!

Someone, a pureblood I suspect must have hurt Harry, and left alot of bitterness and issues of trust in their wake. Anyway it enough to make a person 'once burned and twice shy' that much is certain. Your Harry here reminds me of Severus Snape in that he learned to blend in with the people he was forced to associate with even as he scorned them for the fools that they were for thinking that life was defined by blood and tradition only. Thankfully Harry, unlike Snape has friends who accept his adopted lifestyle, and don't misjudge him for it, still he must be lonely at home by himself. The price of freedom when others have someone to talk to and share all that they have within themselves. Now that Draco has seen the real Harry underneath the fine robes and polished manners can he take the time and patience to woo him to his bed and his heart? A canary can go wild, even as a sparrow can be tamed, and yet both are born to fly and sing there hearts out. Maybe they can meet next in the air where dress and manners take second place to just soaring and feeling the thrill of just being alive. Anywho please continue this lovely piece of yours as I really enjoy seeing what comes next.

I have to admit, I'm loving this story more and more each time I read a new chapter! Keep it up and I look forward to seeing more again soon!
Stef =)

p.s. have you finished the story and are just posting it or writing it as you go?

about #3...

You know, I'm not sure if you realize this, but Draco has become a slight
comedy relief. :-)

His efforts to ''Get Potter'' is almost funny. He's trying too hard, but
HOW do you get through to Harry when he suspects deceit.

By the by [yes I meant to say that], I envy your ''summer vacation'' enjoy
them in your young life while you can.



PS- this REALLY got me curious, are you trying to hit a certain number of
stories in this section??? Like 100??? Because you crank out a lot.

Well you know me...I'm always up for some sort of punishment whether it be ruining that person or physically, don't blame me I'm just so cruel as to where it amuses me.
Anyway I felt like smacking Draco for trying to get revenge for something so crazy. I mean come on you can't expect to get sympathy from a guy who hangs around a bunch of ass-kissers, and people with fake-ness layered on so thick it's like sloppy goop.

can't wait for the next installment....

Soooo need chapter 4! If only there was a way for Draco to find out about Paul.

Another wonderful chapter!
I thought Harry with the guys at the beginning was really funny. I think that was my favorite part.

Good move and counter-move with Draco and Harry.
Harry still thinks Draco is just playing the game and the Slytherin Prince is starting to see just how much Harry is playing one. When is Draco going to see the real Harry? Hehe, that will be fun.

Kudos!

Soooooo need chapter 3!!!! I love that he can still go to the pub with the boys. Wonder if Draco can fit into his world....

Harry seems wholly uninterested. It's really quite sad.