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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo soooo need chapter 9!!! They love each other!!!
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
This was amazing. You are amazing. I had absolutely no idea how it was going to end, and it had so much potential to be stretched out into eternity, but you cut it off in exactly the right place, and in exactly the right way. Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to write this, and post it for everyone to read. ♥
This was amazing. You are amazing. I had absolutely no idea how it was going to end, and it had so much potential to be stretched out into eternity, but you cut it off in exactly the right place, and in exactly the right way. Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to write this, and post it for everyone to read. ♥
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
did I miss this chapter? I have been checking to see. Oh well, wonderful job.
I love it that Harry finally told everyone no and picked Draco.
I love it that Harry finally told everyone no and picked Draco.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! what a great ending to such a great story!
Everything seemed wrapped up nicely.
I enjoyed the boy
Everything seemed wrapped up nicely.
I enjoyed the boy
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been good watching Harry and Draco find their way toward each other, even in spite of having been disappointed by previous partners. They now fit so well together, and share a form of communication that no doubt will confound many people, including Draco's parents. It's rare to find someone who you can trust so openly, and give of yourself without reservation, and the rewards are sweet indeed. Thank you, and please continue to prosper in all ways. ;)!!!
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh but I wanted to know just what Lucius and Narcissa would say. Still It's a happy ending (or at least a smut filled one).
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story , io think iw was very well thoought out.
the only thing i wish could have been different was the endeding...
to have it endmid supper mid conversation ( to get the feel of the tention and climate in the room) maybe have it end with a clever, whitty retorte from either harry or draco making lucius look good in a bad way....you know whnat i mean like the backhanded compliments purbloods are so good at
there was in no way anything lacking with your choosen ending
i was just not ready for it to end
maybe this one will have some kind of sequal where harry actually has to do more with his trained abiliteies
because one of those factions did find away to start something
the only thing i wish could have been different was the endeding...
to have it endmid supper mid conversation ( to get the feel of the tention and climate in the room) maybe have it end with a clever, whitty retorte from either harry or draco making lucius look good in a bad way....you know whnat i mean like the backhanded compliments purbloods are so good at
there was in no way anything lacking with your choosen ending
i was just not ready for it to end
maybe this one will have some kind of sequal where harry actually has to do more with his trained abiliteies
because one of those factions did find away to start something
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about the end???
Is that the end??? O_o
Damn, that was quick! But, I'm glad they got together and are going to try
& make it work.
Also, glad you put the 'tit-for-tat' in between them, though it WAS during sex.
:-)
I like those moments.
Is that the end??? O_o
Damn, that was quick! But, I'm glad they got together and are going to try
& make it work.
Also, glad you put the 'tit-for-tat' in between them, though it WAS during sex.
:-)
I like those moments.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this a lot. Especially Emma Lansby.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
you know you gotta give it up to Harry for standing up to Lansby, too bad she doesn't
see that HE would be a better ally for her, than the vultures she associate with.
also, glad to see Harry is starting to take a step up in this 'relationship'.
One other thing, I meant to ask this a while back...Michael Corner. Is that
a popular name used like a Mary Sue? I've seen it used before.
..and what EXACTLY is a Mary Sue???
you know you gotta give it up to Harry for standing up to Lansby, too bad she doesn't
see that HE would be a better ally for her, than the vultures she associate with.
also, glad to see Harry is starting to take a step up in this 'relationship'.
One other thing, I meant to ask this a while back...Michael Corner. Is that
a popular name used like a Mary Sue? I've seen it used before.
..and what EXACTLY is a Mary Sue???