rate_review Reviews

ok...very promising start.....now just see how draco save our poor little harry then...please do hurry to post the new charpter, cannot wait.

wow...harry lost his memory? that sux.
by the way, your disclaimer is wrong. you have to write in the disclaimer how you do not own harry potter and how you dont make any money off of your writings.
grammer is kinda low, so you might want to work on that. some parts are a bit rushed and confusing.
besides all that, i love the plot. hopefully harry remembers draco again sometime.

Has potential!!!

Petunia seems to care. Tooo little tooo late! Poor Harry! Soooo need chapter 3!!!

wtg! great chapter