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for Move, Countermove

by ronsmistress

person kazfeist
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least he's being honest about his motives. I can't wait to see how he woos her in public! And, I'm expecting a big wedding...but didn't someone forget a contraceptive charm that night? :D
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
go draco go draco go draco!

at first I was confused by Hermione's reluctance but after she explained it, I got it....she's right, she shouldn't have to hide. if he wants her, he should be proud to have her on his arm.

go draco go draco go draco!
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!
update soon
person Rosamund
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good move, Draco! Awesome! Way to keep her on her toes, while maintaining her lioness pride ;)
person Lily
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Thank you for writing a sequel. ^-^ I look forward to ready all the chapters that are written.
Thank you again for writing a story that sunk it's claws into me. Teehee!
person Rosamund
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome sequel! Can't wait for more!!!
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was hot, and really a nice rough fuck is the only way Draco and Hermione can be reunited!!
keep it up!
xxx
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really this story! Their love story here is very realistic. Not too much drama or deep conflict. I especially like this chapter. To think that all those six years Draco has made himself successfull for Hermione is really romantic. And the sex in the end made everything complete! The passion between them is still there. After all they've been through, I hope that Hermione will realize that they are meant for each other.
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
These two are like a damn ticking time bomb that goes off every time....HOT. Don't question Hermione, remember Tonks rules.
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Thank you, this is perfect!!!!! Keep them coming...