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for Move, Countermove

by ronsmistress

schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a great dinner scene...this Draco is so mature but so sexy and quietly commanding which is what Hermione needs. NIIIICE
person kazfeist
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting update....but I really don't foresee any problems. They're both adults, independent financially, and I can't see why societal approval would matter to either of them. Hopefully, Hermione won't find out any evidence presently linking Lucius to the Death Eaters....or will she? :D
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!
Now I must go pack for the scout camping trip.
Say a prayer for me. I'll be surrounded by a bunch of brownies.
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story and relationship...so fun.
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....what now? Lucius you big fathead and Draco obviously didn't mean how it was taken. Oh dear.
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sadness to how it ended! But,I love how it was written!! Can't wait to see how Draco tries ti fix this. Great work!!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You update like nobody's business! Love it. =]

A few errors here & there,but over all, love the chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again pls tissue alert needed on #7... hey that is so beautiful and cute.. That is the Draco I love and never transpire on the JK Rowlings books, I am greatful to her but yeap I am more greatfull to the wonderful imaginations of my fan fic writers.. BRAVO!!!!!!!!!
person Rosamund
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! keep the chapters coming fast! ;)
person andarte
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far! :)