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Wow, finally an opening toward a chance at friendship and perhaps more. It just goes to show how much Harry needs to help even when being annoying in his approach. That's his specialty of course helping out despite the less than subtle reburks from Malfoy to where Harry resorted to acting out with the intent to provoke a response, even a negative one to get the ball rolling, so to speak. Malfoy still has genuine issues with both his world's Harry and life in general, but for now maybe, just maybe a sincere appeal to appreciate his home will help him to open up to this Harry. At least that is to be hoped for, and this should give Harry a reason to consider his own world's Malfoy is in need of a friend too. All in all you keep on giving the gift that never fails to delight me, so please continue.

I am enjoying your story so far, I hope that Harry and Draco get together in this universe. Not sure if I like the ending you have planned though. But I still am looking forward to your story, you're doing a great job.

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I figure out you cose at the end of chap. 4.. It took like four pices of paper and an ice cream but I did it lol..

I figure the story was going in that direction, from the way you have set it up so far... But I am curious to see how you take it there..

<3 Lovely work BTW

Having just read your latest chapter, I stick to my theory more than ever... But of course I don't know yet how the story will continue, I just enjoy.
Don't know what has happended to alternate Harry, but he is pretty selfish. Seems he's somehow switched sides with Draco in this other universe?
Quite funny, the way Harry is stalking Draco!

Excellent job. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, I can clearly envision Draco's private garden. Thank you for updating!

I definitely loved the descriptions of Draco's attitude and perceptions in this chapter. You could actually feel and see him tearing at the seams trying to withstand the sympathy Harry is giving him. Very nicely done.

I love the way Harry just won't quit! He's much more understanding and I can't wait to see where their relationship goes.

Great chapter!

about #3...

Okay, I just want to know...you can even answer in some type of code for
me to figure out...WILL Harry go back to his universe before the story is
over & make a move towards HIS Draco???

By the way, I'm under the impression if the 'other' Harry had Ron & Hermione
in his life, they would have been able to 'ground' him...help him see the other
side of things, think things through and 'temper' that temper of his.

ALso, out of curiousity, where did you come up with your 'name'?

Hello again. So this Draco has lost his family, his fortune, and his way, wowsers that a lot to take in, and his Harry is such a jerk to boot. I can see the simpatico-like feeling of finding a person who needs help much like he did after all Harry went through during his own time of need. Clearly this guy needs a friend, and no one is better suited to offer this then our Harry. Like his mom he has the amazing ability to see to see another person better than they can see themselves. Draco needs someone to just be there for him to help him let go of his pain before it devours him whole. He needs to learn that it is okay to live, laugh, and love as before. Life is too short to spend it looking back and forgetting to enjoy today. Here is a precious gift of friendship in the offering so I sincerely hope Draco doesn't throw it away. I look forward to your next chapter-so please continue to shine on!

The way it looks now I would say there is no way the alternate Harry can make a match with his Draco. No Way. But "our" Harry will probably fall for him - and what will happen then? Harry has to return to his own universe - or will he send the other Harry back, because he is better suited to the other universer? Speculation, I know. But this story reminds me a little of your "Wondrous Mirror".

Soooo need chapter 4!!! What will Draco do now?