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I can't help picturing the other Harry as a younger man, because he acts so immaturely.

It must be unbearable to feel that you have no meaning in life, and this coupled with the knowledge of what his other selves have been up to has left the Harry of this world torn and unsure of himself. The pain of feeling worthless has driven him to do the unthinkable and cause another to suffer, and it's ironic that this one person now means everything to him. Alot of issues here yes, but this Harry needs to first admit his problems and then resolve himself toward dealing with them-with our Harry's help naturally. Kudos to you for setting things straight, and I await your next chapter to see where this goes from here. So please continue to entrall us all.

about #6...

okay, I FINALLY get it...it took 6 chapters, but I figured out
what you're trying to do.

You're trying to get EVERYone to despise this other Harry with his
SELFISH attitudes & pitifulness.

Yep, that HAS to be it. Because how much of an ass can he be??!!??

I would have packed my bags and split a long time ago, instead of
enduring such a jackass who would give MYSELF a bad name.

...and where the hell is the other Hermione to whoop sense into him???

Oh this is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I come back to find 2 chapters have been released! This makes my day!! I really like how the story is progressing....especially with "universe b" Draco falling in love with "universe a" Harry. The story flow has been amazing, it makes me want to read more and I am only through the middle of the chapter. I cannot wait to read more chapters!

oh wow... I think this is going to get very interesting very fast! (Not that it isn't already interesting enough)...
But just thinking about what's going to happen... Like, if Harry and Draco fall in love in this universe, well obviously Harry can't stay in this universe forever so either berk Harry will have to go back to the other universe where everyone there will wonder what happened to Harry or new Harry will have to go back to his own time and attempt to fall in love (or not) with a very different Draco to this one... And, yes, for the record, I AM aware that was a complete rambling mush of words but it just goes to show that I'm really into this story! =D
Can't wait to see more soon!!!

Yay, loooved :D

Soooo need chapter 6!!! Harry is falling in love with Draco? What will the other Harry do?

Oh but I dont' think falling in love is a good idea when you're not in your own universe. That's a bit of a strain on the long distance relationship.

Loved the part with the other harry poping up... It's like 'You're cheating on me with... me...' but without the whole dating thing lol..

Man I wish I had know that the whole code thing was a real code.. It would have made it alot easier..

<3