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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A sequel would be nice, this really was a good one-shot though. Their emotions were captured well. Keep up the good work! I'll be eagerly awaiting the next story.
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a blast from a reader's past, glad to see you're
still around. :-)
I liked this, it's been a LONG time since I've read a story
with this type of theme, it has a feeling of getting a glimpse
of the gritty side of war through the eyes of two men.
VERY realistic.
Won't you at least do a 5 or 12 part story someday?
still around. :-)
I liked this, it's been a LONG time since I've read a story
with this type of theme, it has a feeling of getting a glimpse
of the gritty side of war through the eyes of two men.
VERY realistic.
Won't you at least do a 5 or 12 part story someday?
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story!
I wish it was longer but I'm still satisfied with the it. The dialogue was very amusing and not OOC like some stories. very descriptive scenes, makes me happy! Love their bickering at one another.
I'm not good at writing reviews so usually I never write one, but this one-shot deserved some feedback. Anyways, I'm gonna go read some of your other stories....maybe I will review them....probably not, we'll see! ^^
I wish it was longer but I'm still satisfied with the it. The dialogue was very amusing and not OOC like some stories. very descriptive scenes, makes me happy! Love their bickering at one another.
I'm not good at writing reviews so usually I never write one, but this one-shot deserved some feedback. Anyways, I'm gonna go read some of your other stories....maybe I will review them....probably not, we'll see! ^^
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should visit this story world again sometime. Maybe in the future! Do they win the war? Do they both survive? Do they ever get together?