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I love it. This is totally amazing and truly realistic. May I request you make a sequel about it maybe trying to convert Lyra a little. she may not love Draco with Hermione but she can learn to like it even a little. She may just be hurt because Draco left her and Astoria for Hermione. Can you please write another chapter but this time depicting Lyra's reaction when Rose comes in and sees her reaction with Draco and Hermione? Sometimes people just need more love and attention but often times they also need to learn what they have lost to appreciate it. I really want to see Lyra's face seeing Rose with her Draco, Hermione and Scorpius happily together. It would probably burn her but its so good to let her understand and learn as a character...
Please please write another story?
Please?
Can't we make it a fic challenge?

Interesting story with a different approach, brava! A wondeful read.

I hope I never find myself in the situation where I have to deal with a child on a self destructive course like that. It broke my heart just to read that and to know that it's a reality for far too many people. That being said, love the compassion, the heartbreak and finally the heart wrenching decision of tough love to try amd make a bad situation better. Well done! Oh and did I mention the sex scenes were totally hot??? :)

It was very good, definitely... divorce is such a difficult thing.
I do wish I could read about how they came to love each other, but it's nice to leave it to the imagination, as well. Well done.

Well written and well thought out

Wondering if Lyra will self destruct or not

Draco and hermione scenes were HOT

I absolutely loved it! You're writing just drew me in from the first paragraph. Even though it was only a one-shot, you painted a clear picture with well developed characters. I love who you showed their life together through conversations and their actions rather than spelling everything out for us. I only wish that you would turn this into a story. I'd love to see how Lyra reacts to everything. I'll take what I can get though, because this was awesome!

I never expected two major sex scenes in one-shot. Awesome plot. Though I really wanna know if Lyra will manage to put herself back together in a good way.