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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great writing and so entertaining! I enjoy the tension although I think it would be more believable if you made Hermione's dislike of Lucius more disdainful and cautious than hostile and please clarify a bit more of Hermione's reactions and her awareness of them when Lucius touches her. But other than it is wonderful to read :) updateupdateupdate!
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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your Hermione, although she is being WAY too nice to people who are bossing her around, lol. I do NOT like her grandmother, though. And Lucius... he's got a lot of making up to do. Added to the wartime issues and his death eater status, he ruined Hermione's ministry career. Hermione will be hard pressed to even tolerate him, much less anything more. But you have written an engaging story so far, so I am looking forward to seeing you meet this challenge.
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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
funny, fast paced, smartly witty and completely enthralling....LOVE IT
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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how he seems to be suddenly turning up in all these unexpected places...very slytherin.
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like it will be a lot of fun! I'm curious to find out more. Please update soon
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you gonna update? I'm hooked already and its just the first chapter :D Please please update soon! I wanna see what happens!
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, nice beginning. You have me looking forward to more.
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it! update again soon please :D
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You ARE going to keep going, right? Right? Don't abandon this just when it's getting good!
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh this is amazing. Very original idea and so far you've captured both Lucius and Hermione perfectly. I can't wait to see what happens next!