schedule
May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice start ...please update soon i would like to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
schedule
May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a short but great beginning xxxx
Please add more soon
Please add more soon
schedule
May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is starting with a little mystery, good that is always a good sign for a good fic, We need a little larger chapter so hey let your imagination fly!!!!!!!!!1
schedule
May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well i am intreged by the story! i do hope that you have lots more to write! i also hope that you have no intenion to skip anything. :) one request can you make sure that you have your commas and quotion marks in, it helps alot! Thanks!! :) i do hope that you will post soon and regularly!