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for Blood is thicker then water,

by luciusmalfoy76

schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic update...not what I expected xxx

Please update so I can find out what is going on....I hate cliffhangers as you can tell by my persitence xx
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found this and I want to make it very clear that I like it so far! Please understand that this is NOT a flame, I just have a couple of technical issues and I hope some suggestions won't offend you? Your build-up of the mystery was nice, as was her recognition of Snape, but I think that perhaps you may need a beta to help you with things like some punctuation and flow. I noticed that some of the other reviewers mentioned how short your chapters are and perhaps a little more description could help with that. I think you are still discovering your own style, but things do seem a little choppy at points. I'm just trying to help, so please don't take this wrongly, ok? I very much like the story and will continue to read if you continue to write>
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutlty! This is a brilliant move!.So when do we expect a little bid more longer chapters. I hope very soon!
person Snakekat
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that you are keeping everyone guessing what the Malfoys are up to.
I also like the Snape/Lucius bi twist.
well done
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are panicking me!!!! This chapters are created short to set us in a frenzy of needing more... LOL Please keep them coming.
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I'm a bit confused...is this a Draco or Snape story. Sorry....
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait to hear their explanations xxx

I have a feeling Hermione is going to love it there xx

I am going to guess that maybe she is related to Snape ..that's just a twist I would see coming xx
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm all caught up now and I'm loving this story. I was thrilled that Hermione recognized Severus and that he welcomed her touch and kiss on the cheek. That was so sweet. I'm looking forward to Hermione's meeting with the Malfoy's in Switzerland. I can't wait for her reaction when she finds Draco waiting for her and I'm soooo curious as to what Lucius' instructions for them will be! This is addictive! Keep up the good work!

Lisasnape
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This suspense is killing me, of course in a good way.. LOL
person kazfeist
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events! :D