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for Slyth's Snakepit

by Tanya

person Anon
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow he is one bitter man i hope snape saves him in time .....
well love it and cant wait till the next update :)
person Baxter
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i luv ur story please update soon :)
person azura
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM

looks interesting so far, though you might want to include some more lines that aren't dialoge..
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I guess since Lucius is really Harry's head of family, he could arrange a marriage contract and circumvent Dumbledore's minipulations somewhat. I love that he IS at his aunt and uncle's house, just not the one Dumbledore thinks he should be at. I really like this story.
person nari-chan
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved it i cant wait till the net chapter is up ! keep up the amazing work
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! Wonder how they are going to handle Dumbles?
person nari-chan
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can wait your story is great so keep it up :)
person anniea
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo more please
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He shrieked in delight and absolute anger. "I love your story, but if you don't continue it, I may have to have a fit..." He blushed and nodded rapidly. I do really love it so far though." n///n
person neko ryuga
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please up date real soon. This is one of the most well written stories I have read in a while. I will definitly keep track of you and check out your other stories. Thank you for the good read.