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I was just wondering if you had plans to update this story or if I should remove it from the list of fics I check for updates every few weeks.

Thank you for and interesting tale (however deplorable certain characters may be!)

Regards,
Shay

I just finished reading ILAW and I absolutely loved it. I hope that you finish it. I truly enjoy how you depicted Lucius and Hermione's character. I also like the fact that Ron is acting on his inner demons since in the actual series he is filled with jealousy and envy. (Yeah don't like him much). Keep writing, what I have read so far is very good.
Sincerely,

Vilma

Wow your story is absolutely amazing. I think I fell in love with it. I

Your writing is dark but also full of strong emotions and feeling. I hope you finish your stories because they deserve closure, we all do, and for the pain to ease to allow healing. The pain and sorrow, are palpable and raw. Lucius and Hermoine, deserve recognition and vindication . Maybe instead of hurting others, should they find peace? Love so strong that makes all envious; and to forgive them all in a public audience, maybe Lucius opens a legal center for war victims seeking retribution? Revenge not in destruction but in rising above the other ? Besides that have your beta correct the grammar and clean it up a little. Keep it up, both and Chalie's tale should be finished, they are sad and beautiful. They could have good endings that demonstrate the human power of survival and healing. Hmm, through rebirth and new life...do I hear babies crying? Enemies hate happy people...hint

I love this!!! I hope there will be more!!!

This is enchanting!!!!!! I love what you have plan for Ron, but I insist maybe Lavander will kick his butt good? That will be the day for Won Won! LOL

Ok we need to regroup! Why? We need to kick Ron's butt PRONTO! and good. Please stop him! Git! Sorry to involved, LOL. And this just make me think about all the women that are going through the same........ Well I need some romance but first things first we need revenge and a very public one. Punishment to all that put her down all these years.

I wasn't expecting an update so soon, and to get two chapters was even better! I hope Lucius lends her a lawyer that is half shark, half goblin and ALL mean! I can hardly wait to see what he does to the freckled wart. Let's face it, Slytherins are at their very best when avenging their loved ones--it's why we love the bad boys, isn't it? Well done!

What a wonderful story you have here. I hope you have a new update soon. Hope that Ron gets his just deserts.

I have this urge to use an 'Engorgio' spell on a papershredder and then lower Ron into it feet first so he can watch his body become as small as his brains and personality. You wrote that chapter a little too well, I think. It was horrifying, and you have a lot of talent, especially if as you said in an earlier note, that this is un-beta'd. I am delighted to see that you decided to update, however and will wait eagerly for more.