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Way better on Draco's part. I love him.
And good for Sev for not retaliating. That probably wouldn't have made 'mione very happy.
I love this story. I keep checking back for more updates. :]
Keep up the good work.

Great story!

I love the character interactions. I think that it is great that the boys are finally giving Hermione her much deserved attention... all except for Harry. His attentions to her are just plain creepy, you know?

Well done--keep up the good work!
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RE: chapter eight

OK, wow, where to begin?

Umm, Draco, while with his parents, came off as completely immature, petulant, frantic in his whining and obsessing over Hermione and his childish demands that she be his, thus making him somewhat scary, and a bit amusing too.

The young seamstress was an unique bit of cheesy comic relief adding to the overall farcical quality of the chapter.

I'm not sure if that was the tone that you were trying to aim for, but that is how it all hit me. Don't get me wrong, I'm still enjoying the heck out the story.

Have fun and keep up the good work!
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great updates!

Very good!!
I really hope Draco wins her over!? Is it to late to vote Draco!lol!!

first off... when i commentted on severus playing hermione i meant when he ranted about not being good enough for her and that draco would be more suitable. to have hermione take pity on him. i'm surprised that draco run to mummy and daddy for help but at this rate he will all the help he'll get. i don't approve of the malfoys making plans on getting hermione pregnant... really scary. can't wait for the declaration of love in the great hall... i'm half expecting to get a good laugh out of it.

the part where lucy is complaining about butting in his special time with narcissa... it reminded me, in when malfoy wants a witch, how is lucy really dealing with narcissa being gone for a week. i wouldn't be surprised if he was crying or doing something very unlucius.

This is starting to look alot like your other story When Malfoy Wants A Witch.

hahaha..this is unbelievable! Draco planned to sprog her up?! Hahahaha...I kinda couldn't close my mouth because I smiled like loony all the time while I was reading this! Hell, even older Malfoys went on with him too! I can't wait to read when Hermione get to visit their puppies :) Keep updating!

P.S. Even though I also like Snape but I'm still Team Draco :P

The direction this story is going is neat but I really despise how you are portraying the characters. Couldn't you keep them in character in the slightest?

Oh good grife the boy whines alot.He's comming off as a spoilt child and not someone who's on the cusp of adulthood.Then again Hermione is acting flighty.Still it's a cute story.