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for Care to Play?

by ronsmistress

schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha! this is cute
keep it up

xxx
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! It's getting good!! Don't stop, I think this thing between Hermione and Draco might lead somewhere. You know, my mother used to say that the boys who bullied me in elementary school did it because they liked me and didn't know how to express it... perhaps Draco was having his elementary school bullying moment with regards to Hermione. Don't forget to update soon!!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good grief what a kiss.
Lucky lucky girl.
More please
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start,. I wonder where they both are going with these games. I think your story needs a little more conflict? Some resistance? And I think it would also be wise to start introduce secondary characters to keep it interesting :) I look forward to an update!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you have very little dialogue...nice fic.
person jubilant
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I looooooove this bold Hermione! She's a breath of fresh air compaired to "other" Hermiones. Keep up the writing!
person jaceni50
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this plot. It's interesting and can't wait to see how this story develops. :)
person kittycat30
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Apparently, I didn't get the two words, because my review didn't post... So - LOVE IT! What a great build up & they only kissed! Hhhmmm, Draco seemed flustered. Lucky Hermione!!!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. I love this story. It makes me smile. =D
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very nice simmering!!