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by ronsmistress

schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sense an explosion is on its way... great chapter!!
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nothing wrong with not having a war going on in the story, isn't that the whole point of an AU story? We can set any stage we want - and I'm loving this one. :)

I like that it's slow teasing, a gentle build up into something more and I look forward to each move they make and the fact that she writes and tells Tonks everything and that Tonks is supporting her, just an added bonus. A girl does need someone to talk to and share her secrets with when she's up to a little mischief. I think I'm in dire need of a little mischief myself. LOL
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my -- the chess moves are well-thought out and calculated....the UST is unbearable. LOL - though they are both playing with fire.
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this chess game, had better results than the regular one.
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh heh.

This is wonderful. Yay Tonks!
Playing chess, it's brilliant.
person kazfeist
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very nice story, so far. I hope that, while lust is probably foremost in their minds as of now, they'll discover they have more than that in common. :D
person kittycat30
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Who knew chess could be so stimulating?
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have so far!!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Does Hermione realize she's playing with fire????? LOL. I can't wait for Draco to come out and play.

PS: I'm assuming Hermione and Draco are heads, no?

Loved the chapter. Loved his confusion.

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