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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha, dracos getting flustered!! good game Hermione! :)
keep it up!! I love it!
You might want to think about a beta,
there aren't a lot of mistakes, but it doesnt quite flow in a few places.
keep it up!! I love it!
You might want to think about a beta,
there aren't a lot of mistakes, but it doesnt quite flow in a few places.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely one of the BEST versions of a push/pull story I have ever read! I am thoroughly enjoying their little game. I foresee it being a draw though. :-)
Thank you!
HG4eva
Thank you!
HG4eva
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the games we play, now I am going to find someone to play chess with...lol
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic! I love that you paint a picture of a smart independant hermoine who likes to take control, it's very unique to this site. I think the way you write it it's totally believable too. I like this a lot more than those stories where hermoine becomes submissive jelly as soon as draco shows any interest. So, update asap I think i'm addicted :)
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please
I have this imagine of Draco being a little like a dear csught in headlights at the moment.
Bless him.
I have this imagine of Draco being a little like a dear csught in headlights at the moment.
Bless him.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahaa point to Hermione love it :P
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is getting to be more interesting every chapter! Draco is bewitched, bewildered and bothered! Congratulations to Hermione! Im so excited to know what will be their next move!
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fighting fire with fire - I love it. Tonks rocks! LMAO. Next chapter please. I can't wait to see what Draco comes back with. :)
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is impossible for me to not like anything you've written so far on this website. Your stories are amazing!
And please, tell me that Draco will react the way we all want him to, cause I'm looking forward to reading some Dramione smut ;)
And please, tell me that Draco will react the way we all want him to, cause I'm looking forward to reading some Dramione smut ;)
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I love the premise and it seems as though it'll be a very good story. I think all you need is a good beta to take care of the grammatical errors, but keep going hun, it sounds fun. :D