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Chapter 19: Oh, oh. Jessa

Ooh, I think it's one of your best! It's definitely one of my favourites!

Hello! Oh, I really, really liked this story and when Elias was sick, I began to cry! Booo! And oh, I just loved Jessa, do you think I have a shot at her? She seems bisexual to me ;) I laughed my brains out when Elias saw that she had spanked Draco! Oh, I can just see it in front of me.... mehe! Lucius and Hermione was, as always so cute together! I wonder if what Hermione was about to say to him now at the end was that she was pregnant again... that wouldn't surprise me one bit! What a nice wedding gift too! Oh, and the smut was as always jummy, but I just have a tiny remark I feel like I need to tell, because your story is so wonderful otherwise and that is such a stupid mistake... but Nirvana doesn't mean what you, and many many other, think it means. In fact, it is the opposite of that. When you reach Nirvana in Buddhism, it's like blowing out a candle, your soul cease to exist so it can't be reincarnated. However, in Hinduism, when you stop being reincarnated, you move up to a higher plan and I expect you to feel all good and orgasmy, but that is called reaching Brahma. But as I said, a lot of people mix those two things and Nirvana is such a funny thing so say :P I just thought I could give you the heads up, even if it's such a small error. Otherwise, you write better than most people and it's a delight to read your way with the language! I'm eager to see your next fic!

Have a nice day!

Miya

That was *perfect*. Completely original, well-written, and best of all, I love a story where Lucius has redemptive qualities and Snape was loved as he should have been. Fantastic.

Chapters 12: Christmas has arrived early for Hermione. And tonight, I suspect Christmas will come early for Lucius, too. At least he may get to unwrap his buffed and scented, feminine little date down to the lingerie (I hope).

Ah, it is always a wench to let go and buy yourself something when you need to buy things for your child. But sometimes, it truly is necessary in order to have a more positive attitude toward the day-to-day life of a mother.

Poor Lucius, dithering about Armani ties and tied up in knots about his first date in forever. It sounds like he

Chapter 13: Ah, so Lucius slept only with the older hens, not the spring chickens. What an eye opener for Harry to see Lucius act the fond father to his little son. That Elias is so charming and cutely naughty. He

Chapter 14: Wow, what was the hostess trying to do, get fired? Patrons must go to such an expensive restaurant all the time with trophy wives. I can

this was an AWESOME story. you should totally make a sequel.

Chapters 9-11: Lucius being a ppor sport at losing ground in a children

oh man!! i came back from a trip and had a few chapters to get through!!! im so sad it's done, but so delighted by it. how lovely.