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ahh.... come from a day of work, fighting a yucky cold, and i have a chapter waiting for me. elias is a wonderful character. i cannot wait to see him develop. i like this anticipation. no rushing, here.

I am loving this story already! Please, will Elias ask someone totally inappropriate, like Ron or Molly or Percy, about Lucius being his father? That would be so hilarious!

I think I love you,no long waits between chapters, what a star.
Already looking forward to see what you do next with Snape.

Oh just perfection! I can't wait to read more...*sigh*

Is it weird that I geeked out when you remembered me? Thanks for the clarification of the Ron situation. I love all your stuff. Remus may be my personal favorite, but the way you write, I

First of all, you are very welcome!! Second, that Elias is one smart little boy!! I am of the mind set that he will figure it out before Hermione and Lucius get up the guts to tell him. Just my thoughts on this. I am thoroughly enjoying THIS story, but I do believe that I saw in your replies, that you are working on a Sev story, YEA !!! I think I have read "The Bond" three or four times!!! I LOVE that story. "Remember" is also one of my favorites! Sad but FANTASTIC! I can't wait for the next update!! I am off tomorrow, so I will have plenty of time to read it (HINT HINT)

Hello again! I can't believe I went away for a short while and missed all of this until now! I must say you are doing an incredible job of redeeming him and making it very believable that they are coming together. I loved their "date" even if they didn't know they were on one. And, I think their son is precious and about to show them just how smart he is. lol Please keep up the great work. I am really enjoying this. Thank you! HG4eva

I read that your story is complete...how many chapters is it??

You always write such great stories and please add more than one a day as I am addicted xxx

Mwah Mwah

Jessie

I have to say that something that I often struggle with are stories where the 'transition' for Lucius from the wizarding world to the muggle world is just not believable some how. I have never thought that he was 'just interested' in the muggle world, or needed to know about it for 'investment purposes'. To me, a part of him will always carry that smug sense of superiority over the muggle world. That having been said, the way the you have written his interaction with the world is entirely believable. Great job, and I also think that the tension between Lucius and Draco, coupled with the tension between the Weasley clan (including Harry) and Lucius will play a powerful role in this story. I am also interested in seeing what this 'zing' of electricity that happens whenever Hermione and Lucius touch may actually mean. I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter (and if you wanted to reward your loyal readers with a new chapter a day early, that would be awesome!).

This such a sad and touching story, Elias makes me giggle and smile. (I don't even like children, not even fictional ones) But oh how can you now love this fictional little boy lol. He's so adorable!!!

Now, I would like some more.. As I really hope it isn't the end. First time I actually start reading your fics from the beginning so, please more.

It's nice to see how it would have been if Lucius was the one instead of Draco.. I loved that one aswell..

So more when you can!!