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for Shadows Of The Past

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay. So Lucius is totally making me swoon. And it was so easy to picture that outfit he was in.....grrrrroooowwwwlll. =D Fantastic update, I can't wait for more!d
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this will be a great story, I am sure!

I was a little reluctant after the first chapter, because I wasn't quite sure if I should classify their intercourse as rape or not. But since she obviously doesn't feel like it was, I am comfortable now. You know these stories where somebody's raped and a few chapters later is madly in love with her rapist? Dangerous stuff if you ask me! It makes the worst kind of humiliation seem petty...

I am glad that Lucius accepts the little tyke without any hesitation! It's a new chance for him, too. I can understand, that Draco isn't happy about it at all, though. But he will come around, won't he?

Thanks for this story, glad you're back on LM/HG!
person KellyJCR
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am already worried about poor Elias. He might have some problems with Hermione after he finds out that she didn't contact Lucius about him being his father. Then on the other hand he might have issues with Lucius and the life he leed before his conception. I don't know how you are going to dance your way to a happy ending with this. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Well done!!! P.S. Congrats on grad school. I've toyed with the idea of going back myself.
person Citten
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rock on!! love this story! well i love the way that they both feel the electricity between them it makes it that much more fun! :) well i am really glad that you posted soon i was dying for a new chapter! :) please say that you will be posting regualarly!?! that little boy is going to be great fun in pushing his parents! i cant wait!! i do hope that the next is soon! i also love how lucius is so chiverous (such a gentleman) i would be swept off my feet really soon! ;)
person Gertie
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it weird that I geeked out when you remembered me? Thanks for the clarification of the Ron situation. I love all your stuff. Remus may be my personal favorite, but the way you write, I
person VoraciousReader
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter, it was so sweet and very natural. And yes, if I had seen Lucius in muggles clothes at the zoo I would glare in envy as well!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 was fab! I can't wait for more.
And no, you weren't gone that long. But much like an impatient child, it felt like FOREVER to me. LOL!
person Jesse
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love to see your new story up!! I am always so excited to see something from you because I know I can expect brilliant writing. Can't wait for more.
person Donavon
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Always read and enjoy your stories, they are brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!! however, have medic broblems, and the stroke caused problems
with my speach, which meant i could not use speech soft ware.

However, when it is for such a wonderful writer, somehow I seem to overcome my problems. Even when i might not give a review always know that I am reading and thoughly enjoying your stories.

Best wishes, always,

Donavon.
person sassmacfru
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see this story up! I have been checking the site for some time now knowing that you had this one in the works. I am enjoying it so much and Elias is a doll! I love how he repeats everything but in his own style! lol. I also read your responses to the other reviews and see I have two more stories to look forward to!!! teeeee!!! ;)