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for Shadows Of The Past

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I still have tears in my eyes from laughing so hard bless that child.
My pity to Lucius I think we have all been there in the restroom and heard a loud Twinkle teinkle little star!

Please write more soon.
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved the "Uncle Ron caught lobsters off a Quidditch Harpy" line, a classic, young Elias is a very amusing young man. My youngest used to come out with things like that, obviously not relating to Quidditch, when he was little, always embarrassing his mother.
Loving the story, patiently awaiting your new Snape fic. Loved your little snippet yesterday.
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person Gertie
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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person Star
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you you are one of my faviorite writers? Thank you for another chapter. I am looking forward to seeing this to the end!
person Robs
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....just, wow. You are an author I admire, so whilst checking for updates to other LM/HG fics I am reading, I decided to give yours a go. I am very glad I did. It's brilliant! I love the way you have written Lucius. He is still a proud man by any stretch of the imagination, but he has a really endearing sense of vulnerability. I'm glad Draco is involved in the story too. Often writers kill off both he and Narcissa or just ignore him, which annoys me because although it's probably a challenge to really involve him in the plot, it makes for a more interesting read when he has to go through everything with his father.

Isn't Elias just adorable? I love the way his intelligence comes through, and how he took authority from Lucius right from the word go. Almost as if he had some innate knowledge that he was his father. Lucius really is trying, bless him. I hope for his sake that Draco forgives him, even if he can't understand.

Look forward to more!!!
person Robs
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and having read that, I think I might have to go back and re-read His Saving Grace again. Otherwise I might get frustrated in between updates, LOL.
person triz
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dum, dum, dum, dummmmmm! little elias, oh so very curious. i'm sure he's going to be very happy when he finds out that lucius is his daddy. he already likes him. now i'm craving for strawberry ice cream and candy floss. well, i've had a few of candy floss these past few weeks. trying some flavors that are new to me. chocolate is my fave of the new. hehe...

penises... well, yes, you may not have one, but thinking of it reminds me of you coz of a fic where you placed penis sizes of sev, lu, and draco; desriptions included! i can't remember which fic at the moment, but that made me laugh. LOL!

can't wait for the next chap update!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was lovely...I like how you are unveiling their feelings so slowly...like peeling layers (which in this case are old prejudices, fear, loneliness, etc.). truly lovely.
person smmz79
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so i am totally excited about this story but honestly when am i not excited about your stories.... i checked out your myspace page i may have already told you that????? but i love your background i like the goth look for hermione, ron and harry very cool and your kids are precious!!!! ok so seriously lucius in jeans hellllloooo wow thats a visual..... yumm loved the day out and elias is starting to wonder hmm i wonder how long it will take him until his curiousity gets the better of him.... so the feelings are starting i can not wait to see their relationship progress... i just reread his saving grace love that story... yeah i know but i had too i was dying for a fic from you annnnddd i read this really sad hg/dm where he dies ok i know not all fics can have happy endings but wow so i had to read something fluffy... great chap and i wanted to say that i appreciate that you finish your stories before you post i like knowing that it WILL be completed... ohhh and i can not wait for your sev fic and a remus woo hoo but i hope that there is a draco in there... :-)
person Roguette
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, again! lol
I always love your stories, but it's been a while since you've written a new one:o
You've been missed!
anyway, hope to read more soon !! ^^