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okay i love that you have made the story based on so sort of readity it makes it fun and different and totally unique--which means i love it!!! :) i love that he had a Gerogei Armionie (sorry dont know how to spell his name) though totally not unecpected. ;) it is lucius after all! :) i love that you had lucius see how much hermione deals with, with that sweet little boy and i also love that he enjoyed it too! totally loved that they both agreed that elise should not have the wine, totally funny their reaction! i love that he was struck speachless when he saw her and that he had pick up her panties and could see her in them and only them. ;) that sly devil :) okay i am dying for more so dont be too long in updating! :)

Great chapter. I can't wait for all the fun drama mixed with Elias' curiosity.

Wonderful new story!

Elias is a delightful child (my daughter has a way of asking questions about things like six and parades in crowded public places. Like the tube *blushes*) It is nice to see how Lucius wants to be a pat of his life and makes a genuine effort.

And the sparks start flying! Great job, as always!

I've been racking by brain about what Elias could mean by 'lobsters', but am drawing a blank. But then, not a native speaker here...

I'm enjoying this so much, Elias is adorable, i used to look after a little girl who would make the most inappropriate comments very loudly at the most embarassing moments. gotta love kids.

Another great chapter! I think we all knew that the money was going to become an issue sooner or later. Also, Draco is not one of my favorite characters (Severus and Lucius are my downfall, in that order) but I think that I will like him in this story. He sounds like an adult, not a spoiled prat. I can't wait for the next update!

Excellent chapter! I'm glad Draco understands now, it means he can get involved! Can't believe he kissed her! Although he did succeed in shutting her up by doing it! After his little chat with Draco, maybe he will realise that he does feel something for her and make his move. I wonder if she will go to him during the storm? Look forward to the next chapter!

You're right, it is definitely dubious consent. But I understand what you said about the character

Hi. I found it here first, so I thought I would comment here. If I haven't said it before, this story is wonderful. I am glad it is beginning to all come together. Draco's maturity surprised me, too, but I was very glad of it for Lucius' sake. I look forward to him meeting his brother and re-meeting Hermione. And, of course, I wait with great anticipation for Lucius and Hermione's next meeting. I hope they begin to act on some of their shared thoughts. ;-) Thanks! HG4eva

So... just when I was starting to feel extra pitiful for myself, and getting ready for a sad pitty party, I look up my favorite author, and see a new story!!! YAY!!! I about ripped out my iv I was so excited lol. Already I love it. Elias is adorable, with all his questions, and is just too nosey for his own good. Can't wait for Hermione and Lucius to open their eyes. As always, its a pleasure to read your work love! Can't wait for the next update!