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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I did enjoy it. I did.*hands over cookies* Now I can't wait for the next instalment!
I have a sense that Lucius is a little different in this story than he is in some of your other Lumiones. (It's not a bad thing, just an interesting observation...) However, the main thing is I like the story and I can't wait for Elias to get more inquisitive. Will Draco make more of an appearance too, please?
I have a sense that Lucius is a little different in this story than he is in some of your other Lumiones. (It's not a bad thing, just an interesting observation...) However, the main thing is I like the story and I can't wait for Elias to get more inquisitive. Will Draco make more of an appearance too, please?
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I have not laughed so hard in a long time, you've really created an exciting situation for the characters. Please keep it up.
Tina
Tina
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter xxx
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
On this site there are a lot of very good, well-written, steamy stories with quite delicious bits of pure pleasure thrown in for good measure. But, I don't remember the last time I read "moment" as sweet, honest, and romantic as the end of that chapter. That was triple sigh worthy. Thank you. HG4eva
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving this story! I stand by my comment on Elias being the funniest child ever! You have a clever way with words and I adore them when they come out of his mouth!! This chapter looks like it could be the start of something beautiful. I can't wait to watch their relationship unfold!
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant updates, I got the trill of reading three new chapters due to being away for a while:-)) I loved the conversation between Lucius and Draco, very well written. I am, as always, looking forward to read more!
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! Thank you :)
I really enjoyed how Hermione just leapt right in and didn't even think that Lucius might have been concerned for her and Elias. And how Lucius didn't think about how his gesture might've looked to Hermione. And I love Draco; nice, mature, thoughtful Draco. (Can I keep him, please?) I laughed at his teasing of Lucius; the way you write their matured relationship is so enjoyable. :) *throws cookies galore*
I really enjoyed how Hermione just leapt right in and didn't even think that Lucius might have been concerned for her and Elias. And how Lucius didn't think about how his gesture might've looked to Hermione. And I love Draco; nice, mature, thoughtful Draco. (Can I keep him, please?) I laughed at his teasing of Lucius; the way you write their matured relationship is so enjoyable. :) *throws cookies galore*
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You, my dove, have made my weekend so much better with this little chapter. Nothing like a hot kiss and some father son make-up to wipe away the negativity floating inside my head.
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the kiss! looking forward to more.