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by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow so things are definetly moving forward... this was a great chap.... i love that lucius is trying to help hermione and i think it is a little more than guilt i think he does not like that she struggles so much... yeah a kiss i bet hermione is confused.... i am glad that draco is starting to come around and he is very insightful and i think that will help his father when lucius is evaluating his feelings... sooo looking forward to the next chap
person Christine
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Draco is all grown up. I am glad to see that he is supportive. Maybe Draco and Jessa???? Hm something to think about. I imagine Hermione will have a bit of a battle on her hands with Harry and the Weasleys when things come together between her and Lucius but I am confident that she will fight it with aplomb. I wonder how they will handle living arrangements. I don't suppose Malfoy Manor is really Hermione's style. All in all, well done and I can't wait for more, as usual.
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE Draco - and I'd be thrilled to be his right woman! LOL

Lucius is too damn melancoly damn it! Lucius, you want the witch, then do what you need to do. Or has he completely forgotten how to woo and court. My goodness, tentative hearts are such a delicate matter...its a good thing they have a little bulldozer names Elias (and I hope Draco's match making skills come to light - LOL).
person Citten
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am SO looking forward to the coming chapters!! :) well draco has come around and he has grow up quite a lot too! see lucius did do some great good his first son is doing good. well now things are going to start heating up and I so do hope that you don
person Christine
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Close? I am close?! Well now I am salavating for another chappie... I guess I will have to reread what is already posted and wait patiently for you to satisfy my curiosity, as I have no doubt that you will. As far as Molly Weasley goes, I can only hope you put that overbearing woman in her place. She takes entirely too many liberties in others lives, oddly enough in cannon as well as AU she is almost always obnoxious. Thanks for the update.
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah doesn't everyone know about the conspiracy with Candy-land ?? HA HA I have to say, Molly is such a opinionated person in most of the stories I read, that I forgot that she is perfect( in her own little mind) Looking forward to the next chapter!!
person Robs
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! So they have confessed to each other then eh? I was wondering how long it would take for that to happen. Elias seems intelligent enough to be able to work things out on his own. I wonder if he will be able to do it before he gets told? I hope he's not going to have an adverse reaction to all the changes going on in his life....I'm guessing his fondness of Lucius will help. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Candyland. Is. Evil.

And they love it so much they can play it 23 times in a row and still want more. *runs away*

This is a beautiful beginning of their relationship. Very tentative and careful. Good forr them to take it slow and see where it ges. I think Hermione's friends will be very hard on her for this and this might also strain their relationship - or bing them even closer together.

I admire you. I am currently alone in a foreign country working full time with one kid. Three would probably kill me. It is amazing that you find the energy to write and it makes you sharing your stories even more special for me. (I know I sometimes fall asleep on/near the laptop trying to write.)

Thank you for this beautiful tale :)
person KellyJCR
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have come back to two great chapters! Let me start by saying that Dracos acceptance of his fathers behavior was unexpected and I love that it worked out as it did. I dare say that Jessa and Draco might have a future together at least thats the impression I got from that bit of conversation. the way you got Lucisus and Hermione together was masterful. Sometimes there is nothing sexier than a fired-up woman, or so I am told. He seems the type to go for that sort of sassy woman. I can not stress enough the fact that I HATE Molly Weasly. As a matter of fact I am actually pissed off at the situation at hand when it comes to the entire Weasly acceptance where Lucius is concerned. It really is none of there buisiness and, who the hell are they to lay blame soley on Hermione. Okay I'm off my soapbox now. Can't wait for more I feel the heat of the pair starting already. Well done!!!
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chappie!! The thought of Lucius playing Candyland had me laughing.
Oooooh - can't wait to see what happens next.