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Okay, just the thought of Lucius being able to split logs has me just a LITTLE HOT!! Damn, he is so, I don't even have the words for it! Though I can't wait for him to lose just a little of his iron willed control (hint hint) bet that will be a GREAT chapter!

Hermione singing? I can see that,so cool.When they finally get together it'll be just like fireworks.I can't wait.I love the story so far and can't wait for more.

Just saw this fic (I rarelly wander in het waters, and when I do I especially look for you) and read it in one breath.
Can't wait to see the interaction between draco and Elias

I have read the Draco story and this one today - I love being a teacher summer rocks except the lack of income. Anyway your work is impecable. Elias is spot on for the age and endearing. I look forward to more.
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I am really enjoying this. I always enjoy your Lucius/Hermione and this one has a nice spin to it. I can't wait to see where this is going to go. Not to be picky, but I did notice a grammar mistake. When Hermione was talking about how Elias is always talking about Lucius, you write 'hear' instead of 'here'. Just thought I would mention that. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter and I am waiting to see if Elias will find out Lucius is his dad

First and foremost, I love reading your stories. I can honestly say that there hasn't been one that I haven't liked. And I like this one a lot. So with that said, I hope you will not take this review as anything else than very friendly, hopefully constructive criticism. I have no problem with the fact that you take the canon as a loose framework to build upon and that your stories are very "real-life" and have little to do with Rowling's world of magic and its tribulations. However, even then I think it would be good to keep the protagonists somewhat in character, i.e. keep in mind that they are actually magical people. So I am convinced there is no way, for example, that we would see an accomplished witch like Hermione Granger constantly doing her laundry and other chores manually. I am sure she would have some nifty little charm that would do the work for her. After all, even the Weasleys, who are piss-poor, have the household chores done by magic - the dishes wash themselves, the food prepares itself, etc. I know what you've been trying to show with Hermione doing all these things for her son, without ever complaining, because that's what we mothers do, but I'm sure you would be ingenious enough to find another way of showing it, keeping Hermione a little bit more in character.

Again, I love the story as such. The way you describe the relationship developing between Lucius and Hermione is utterly compelling. I will always look forward to more and sincerely hope you won't get offended by my little bit of nitpicking.

Cheers, Madietta

Hmmm no update today... must have been a busy day. Looking forward to your next update (need my fix)

yeahhhhh i loved it and oohhh yeah hermione you definetely 'started' something with lucius... i love that he tried to explain his life being like the candyland game.... that was pretty interesting and i feel so bad for hermione with everything that her friends are doing and how they are making her feel i have a funny feeling that some interesting fireworks will go off when they find out about hermione and lucius' relationship.... ok so i can not wait to read more on elias he is sooo adorable and i can just imagine draco with his little brother that should definitely be cute.... just that little intimate moment with lucius and hermione was hot not because of all the content bc it is not like they were ripping each others clothes off but just the way he was kissing her hand and wrist etc that was very hot and very promising great job as always!!!!!!

I read this story yesterday and didn't have time to review.So,first thing this morning I loaded it back it up,Just so I could.I love it.You just bring everybody to life.Please hurry with the next chappy.