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for Shadows Of The Past

by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep that scarlet woman Jessa away from Hermione. I hate that bitch.
A respectable girl like Hermione doesn
person Robs
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe, major role reversal in the Malfoy household! So is Jessa a squib or something then? I forgot to mention it in my last review. At least Hermione is feeling sexy again, and more like a datable witch rather than just a mother. I hope Lucius is going to continue being gentlemanly towards her! I'm sure Elias will work it out soon....

Look forward to the next chapter!
person KellyJCR
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco giving Lucius the protection speech, Does it get any better than that. Its not surprising though Draco seems the type to tease just a little. Its nice to see the two getting on so well. Can't wait to see the date you have planned or the "after" activities. I think I want them to get it on more than anyone. Great as usual have a fun party. Well done!!!
person smmz79
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh so can you get bored more often... what a great chap and i think jessa is a witch she almost said potion instead of the pill.... you go hermione i can not wait to see what jessa gets her to buy.... and how sweet is lucius a day to the spa and a dress+ wow great job and i really like jessa
person smmz79
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg that was great i just love the way you write draco he is so sarcastic and i love that.... i love that he can give his father hell like that... wow hermione is really getting pampered... ha ha ha omg jessa giving her a demonstration on how to handle her mans tool that is great.... ok so i totally can not wait for the next chap i am really excited to read about this date.... and jessa is very interesting i am thinking that she is a witch but you said that it was not the obvious so is she a squib???? hmmm great job and i hope you are bored tomm..... :-)
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have been the only one so far to make me actually like Draco, CONGRATULATIONS !! So Jessa is some kind of magical being, HMMMMM !!! Enjoy your party!! But don't forget about us panting away for your next chapter!!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter. I'm wondering what would happen if Jessa and Draco found each other :)
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting good, love Draco teasing Lucius with the condoms and Jessa, she must be a squib or a witch, after the potion slip up, teasing Hermione with the vibrators. See they were having a Trinny and Susannah moment trying on the bras!!
Can't wait for more, can smell lemons on the horizon.
Lu
Have a great party.
person triz
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. i had a few chaps to catch up on. damn rains that ruin my net connection.

they're an item! yay! and draco, so funny. condoms! LOL. poor Lucius. he wants Hermione, but wants to do things right by her. i cannot wait for more!!!
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco handing out condoms to his dad? LOL! Loved it.