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for Shadows Of The Past

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to kick your ass for that well-written chapter, but I bet Hermione will kick their asses for their lack of discretion! Very well-written, and I enjoy the way you keep Molly in-character without making her a complete overbearing monster.
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why would I kick your ass? That chapter was absolutely perfect. However if I were in Wizarding Britain, Ronald Bilius Weasley would be beaten beyond recognition. I will accpet Hermione doing it for me, please?
person smmz79
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH seriously you end it there!!!!! boh my god how am i going to make through these next two days till your next chap.... omg that was great i knew molly would say something and i am glad that they got to see hermione and lucius together i think that was important for them to see... i loved it when elias thought hermione was not breathing that was funny.... i bet she could have just died... oh wow so now it is out and you go hermione take care of some business... i can not wait to see how the talk goes and i am so happy that hermione was able to woice her feelings for lucius to let him know how he makes her feel....
person CelticOne
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! So I sm sure Hermione will have some choice words with the Weasleys abouy watching what they say around young kids.

Post new chapter please!!!!!
person Toto
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack, what a place to end the chapter! :(
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How can you leave me hanging like this?? Can't wait for more!!!!
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kick your ass?

No, I want to help Hermoine kick the frackin' Weasley's ass'!! LMAO

Idiots.
person Robs
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really not liking Ron right now. But I love Lucius! They've got to get down and dirty in the next chapter, surely? With all the build up it's bound to be explosive! So Elias figured it out huh? I thought he would. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Ithilwen
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh just got it all read finished.. And you end it like this??? It would be like ending Star Wars when Darth said "Luke, I am your father" *I was raised on Star Wars by my older brothers so that's why I had to add it! Sorry if it doesn't make sense hehe.

But still, end it there?? And I have to say, that was some hot scene you had in the beginning!!! Damn...

I can think what business she's going to take care off, please please let her tare the two weasels a new one ?

schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not as long as you update very, very soon!