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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you made Elias accept the news brillantly xxx

He asked all the right questions...but you have to wonder how he knew all this information xx

So this isn't the climax?? There's something bigger??

Fantastic chapter and looking forward to the next one xx
person Misery
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Personally, I experience the greatest degree of pleasure in having contact with works of art. They furnish me with happy feelings of an intensity such as I cannot derive from other realms.' by Albert Einstein thats how I feel when I read your work...
person Lana
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is a great story! Elias has got to be the cutest and most precocious little boy. The way that he talks and the things he says have me rolling in laughter. It is really true what they say about the mouths of babes.

I can't wait to read more and look forward to more updates. By the way are there still some Hermione and Severus stories brewing in your head? I would really like to to see more. Please keep up the good work!!
person ZukoRocks30
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elias! Too many ups and downs for the little tyke! He's curious about Lucius and Hermione together, then he's afraid his Mom wasn't breathing and needed Lucius to help her out there (that was a brilliant stroke of genius there!), then happy about Lucius and Hermione liking each other, to finally hearing that Lucius is his father!

I'm anxious for the next chapter. Elias is such a smart kid--I wonder what kinds of questions he'll ask. I wonder if he'll accept Lucius at face value at being his father. Wait till he hears he has an older brother! I bet Elias will absolutely love Draco, and of course Draco will dote on him like a big brother should. :-)

I also can't wait to see how Hermione digs into the Weasleys. They certainly deserve an eruption of Mt. Hermione! Especially Ron and Molly. The gall of that woman responding to Lucius's politeness with rubbish about how he's faking it and will never change! >:-<

Anyway, again, love the story! Keep up the good, no, great, no,...excellent work! :->
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think Hermione is first going to kick some serious ass of her own....those Weasley's need to shut up. That was NOT how he should have found out. It's a good thing children at that age are so resilient.

Now, I need a volunteer to hold you down.....RAWR - you left us hanging. :-)
person Janeplay
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go Hermione! Give those Weasleys a right bollocking! Even Molly! I just love a bit of Weasley bashing. (Hint, hint) I am so enjoying this story! Lucius is being very mature about it all. And Hermione is so very innocent. *sigh* *warm fuzzy feelings being generated in chest cavity*

No, no I'm not going to kick your arse. Just please put up the bollocking as soon as possible?
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
kick kick kick! I know you have the next chapter stop being mean lol
person KellyJCR
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I despretly need to kick your ass right now. How can you leave it like that. You can be toatl harpy with the cliffies sometimes. However that was brilliant! I was expecting a little more anger from Molly but, I was pleased with Luciuss response he was eloquint as ever. I love that Ron has realized that he is the one that truely lost out due to his own stupidness. I can't wait for the next update that will be a most intersting chapter. On a nother topic altogether I thought maybe Jessa was a madame or a dominatrix. I just can't get the possibilities out of my mind. Well done!!!
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are evil! I wanna read little Elias's reaction and see Hermione and Lucius action....I mean full on action!
person Sheep
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh! that was a fantastic chappie. I dont want to kick your ass, but i REALLY REALLY REALLY hope that Hermione kicks ron george's and EVERYONES!!! including molly who i think is a heinous bitch and cannot stand :/
This is a fantastic story, as per usual. I really love reading your work,
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! update soon?
Lemons soon?
Sheep x