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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They way you had them explain everything was perfect. I was fearing for a time there that there might be melodrama. Thankfully, you escaped that slippery slope! It was great! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more real soon!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've got tears in my eyes! That was just soo sweet! And little Elias, I wanted to hold him and tell him that everything would be alright! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you freaking tease!!!!! telling elias is not the main climax ok got that but you could not give us a hint as to what was...... omg!!!!!! ok so i am over that.... loved this chap.... i am glad that hermione laid into ron and george and i liked their reaction it helped me to believe that their feelings are true towards elias...i loved that elias took everything so well but i think that he always had an idea he is a smart little boy and i teared up when he said that he used to pretend that lucius was his dad omg seriously...... wow.... ok so i have my jose and salt bring on those LEMONS..... :-) oh and who is going to walk in on them you have a thing for that so i am just wondering will it be draco or jessa??? maybe molly he he sorry i love that you throw that in your stories i like it... and i love how draco responds to walking in on them especially.... ok so now to the big thing what is the big climax... hmmmm could it have something to do with jessa..... maybe draco.... hmmm ok so tues can not come quick enough and i am going to be out of town till thurs hey if i plan it right i may get two updates woohoooo!!!!! your a freaking genius as always!!!! oh i have to say that my fave line was when lucius said he was a 'horny zombie' ha ha oh but what a hot zombie
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How in the world do you manage to make the tears flow, while Elias asks Lucius if he is wanted, to feeling as horny as hell, while they discussed making love in bed? Marvellous writing as usual, anticipating major lemons in the not too distant future!!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Funny and tender at the same time; gods, I wish I could do that. loved chap. 17, just loved it.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Ron and George are a bit tactless, bless them. I thought Elias would take it well. You wrote that scene beautifully. Plus the bonus that Lucius is staying. Even if there's still no smuttiness between them, it's a step in the right direction. So will Elias meet Draco now too? Look forward to the next chapter!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So so so so so good! That was perfectly written in my humble opinion. lol I can't wait for more!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chappy.I am so glad that Elias took the news so well.So, you finally got them in bed together again.You know she could have hurt Ron just a lil more.I Can't wait for the next chappy.Rated 10 out of 10.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another splendid chapter!! I loved what Hermione did to Ron and George, it had me rooting for her. And the part where Elias unbuttoned Lucius' sleeve and looked at the dark mark brought tears to me eyes. I hope to see more soon!!!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Knowing that you like to throw a couple of different surprises in your stories, I am of the same mind set as you. Elias finding out about Lucius somehow is NOT going to be the shock of this story. You have something up your sleeve and of course we are eagerly waiting to find them out!