rate_review Reviews

So after jumping my husband after this chapter (someone had to get some! =) I am back to review. I love that Lucius was a little nervous and not the Casanova he usually is, not to say that a smooth and slick Lucius isn't just as yummy!! But I think this is new territory for him, caring more about Hermione and Elias than himself, and is not quite sure what to do about it. Lovely story so far, and I can't wait for more!!

I must say, I'm not a huge Het fanfiction reader, but I'm completely in love with this story!!! I LOVE Elias! One minute I'm laughing at his antics and the next I'm practically in tears because he's just so sweet (and no it's not near my "parade" lol). Lucius... well I mean do I have to say more? And I like your characterization of Hermione a lot. I'm not a huge fan of her character in the actual series, but I'm fond of her in this story; probably because she sorta resembles me (minus a child). Wow, I've never written so much for a review! Overall, LOVE it, and please, please update (preferably an update with sex ;P)! =)

Draco and Elias....HOW FUN!!!!! And I'm hoping Jessa meets Draco....LOL, I think she take him to task! :-)

"Tears are words the heart can't express

I knew Elias wanted a daddy! I remember my daughter asking me to go to the store and buy her a daddy, before she figured out where daddies came from. Lucius is so sexy it hurts! I love the way you write, so I am going to have to see if I can find some more stuff you wrote!

yum yum.

i just wanted to let you know - your stories brighten my days. i am currently in the process of apartment hunting by myself for the first time in a brand new town halfway across the country... and coming back to the hotel room after a stressful day and reading a new chapter makes me smile. it's so scary to think of moving out to a new place on one's own for the first time ever - so alienated and so new and so independent - but when i think of the fact that lucius and hermione will be waiting, smiling for me at the end of any lonely days, it makes me feel stronger and braver about what i am about to do.

so thank you, my dear. for giving me a little strength in trying times.

I cried. That doesn't happen to me often. I have read more fanfiction then is probably healthy and you are one of a very few who can be counted on to always write quality material that isn't so overdone in the fandom that it becomes pointless. That said, to date, you are the only one to EVER bring me to tears. It was wonderful. I could feel Lucius' anxiety and my chest tightened right along with Hermione's. I was right there with Lucius when he stood watching his little boy sleep after being called Daddy and I thank you for that wonderful chapter. I know you so I know there is more to come, and I can't wait.

Cuervo??? Damn on the best for these two...where's my Silver Don Julio....neat please...

Great chapter, very sweet, very touching and I'm glad Hermione gave those idiots the what for...really.

Climax of the story? Hmmm, I think Hermione wants her own climax. LOL

I love the way your characters are so life-like! And, thus, it follows, that the way they converse is very real,too. I love Elias--he is so much like my daughters and nieces and nephews when they were little! And Lucius is so sexy!

oh boy i see a fight coming and i have a feeling it is going to be good.