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best chapter yet i laughed so hard i cried

Oh no you didn't,Yes you did..A cliffy?Your evil! Elias and Draco together at last.I love Draco's reaction to him.The kid is loveable I wonder if Hermione would want to trade..you see I have a 14 year old son going on 50...

ROFL @ coitus interruptus! I know just how Lucius feels... mid stride halt and about face! ROFL! Loving the story!

FREAKING YUM!

ok so i got back early and this is the first thing i checked for!!!!!!!!!!!! woo hoo... loved loved loved this chap... and come on it could not be perfect there is a young child in the house they always seem to have great timing... :-) ok so he didn't necessarily walk in on them but that was sooo funny i loved lucius reaction and when they told him and he said hermione was going to miss her parade.... ha ha ha that was great ok so i would have loved to be present when jessa was educating hermione on a blowjob that had to be funny... and i can not wait to see draco meet elias... and i really am looking forward to jessas role and finding out what the big climax is... i have a guess is jessa lucius' daughter????? i do not know but it is an idea maybe neither one knows???

I'm loving your story! I can't wait to read more. Why can't you just send me the rest? LOL!

Hell, yes, give him a parade! Just have the USC 'Trojan' marching band lead the way! Ok, I'm sick, I know it. Wonderful lemons, even if they weren't ripe.

Brilliant chapter! So they finally got down and dirty, to be interrupted by Elias. LOL. That kid knows way too much about life already. Look forward to the next chapter!

Thank you, finally some action in the bedroom. Although I'm sure the real thing is around the corner and it will be grand as always. I am absolutely at a loss you mentioned that Elias finding out was a small climax in the story what could the rest be. I feel that Elias as incredible a child he is took the news way to well. I don't doubt that he half figured it out on his own but still there must be some repercussions coming. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!

I have no idea how to tell you how much I am loving this story.Can't wait for more.