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So Jessa is a halfblood. Is she related to Lucius maybe a halfsister or a distant relative. Interesting how your mind works I obviously didn't go down that road. I love the relationship Draco and Elias have in such a short time. Draco is reliving the childhood he should have had and Elias is unknowingly along for the ride. The whore comment had me in hysterics! My oldest is now 7 but couldn't pronounce her "s" until she was 5 we had quite a few shore conversations as they are her favorite animals. Can't wait to see where that takes them. Well done!!!

I am enjoying this fic oh-so-much but I gotta say that this is my favourite chapter. I love the the "brother-bonding". And, as always, I am a complete sucker for the way you write Draco.

(I know it's not appropriate, and maybe even bad form, to beg you to write another Draco fic while you are in the midst of this Lucious Lucius tale, but keep it in mind. Please? I'm willing to bribe...)

Oh you had tears welling in my eyes.. The boys bonding was so touching and funny!

Oh, man! This chapter was so hilarious, I kept cracking up! LOL x many! Dildo Malfoy, indeed! :-> Where do you come up with this stuff? :-)

Really looking forward to the next chapter, though. About time they got it on... ;-)

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! ok so first jessa totally almost slipped and saisd that her father was a pureblood... i think that jessa knows hermione is a witch but does not want to mention it or maybe she is trying to not be a part of that world??? who is her father i am thinking it could be lucius because of some of the things that hermione said when she was thinking about jessa like she never asks questions about lucius well that could be bc she knows him??? i am not sure but i am really interested now... ok so i love love love draco as a big brother i knew this part was going to be good when elias and draco met they were so funny together and i love that they bonded i laughed so hard at some of their antics... ok so we are getting to the good stuff... woo hooo... i can not wait my jose and salt is waiting... great job as always i just love your stories

What fun! I'm glad Draco is so taken with Elias. Lucius was pleased with their interaction--although I'm sure the watering of the bushes horrified him! lol

This is a sort of honeymoon period with Elias, I wonder how Hermione is going to react the first time Lucius has to correct his behavior for something? Obviously the house is not childproofed. I'm sure Draco would not have even thought to touch anything, but Elias is far more adventurous. Actually, coming to the dining room table barefooted wasn't acceptable in our/my house--and we're certainly not blue-bloods. I'm surprised Lucius didn't say anything about that.

I love your note at the end--I can't wait for Lucius and Hermione to finally get together. "Knock and get permission before you enter"! lol This is such a fun story. I like the kinder/gentler Malfoys. Hurry back, please.

--laura

I love Draco. Lucky the witch able to hold his attention. Why do I get a feeling that Jessa might be that witch? Elias is as adorable as ever and I'm glad Hermione and Lucius seem to get some alone time in the very near future. Don't I know that little ones have a sense of timing that never fails...

Brilliant, loving the interaction between Draco and Elias, they're hilarious. More soon please.

I am absolutely loving this fic! You have managed to paint a rather sweet little family, giving lucius a chance at redemption and hermione another chance at a romance! I will be so sad to part with these characters! Oh and loving the jessa mystery! Keep up the great work! You are amazing!

ARGH!

i'm so torn - i laughed my PANTS off during this chapter. your best chapter for dialogue and banter so far, bar none. dildo malfoy was probably my favourite, but the bit about the penis was a close second

but i am DYING for a good sex scene here. i know it's just around the bend, i can smell the lemon rind from here!